Wolf Play : Critique?

02:56:27 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@pup
It's not showing any X's?

Also, please spell your words out. Text talk/chat speak isn't allowed, with the exception to lol/lmao, omg/oml and irl

Savik

02:23:01 Nalavara

Dogwood,
That happened to me twice tonight

dogwood

02:06:00 pup

Do u guys know what's going on... I explored every tile on a level, and it says there's 3 more enemies to battle. But then I clicked on an explorers map and nothing's coming up

Continental Wolves

02:00:25 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Soup

Night Shade

01:19:20 Graves | Chaos

Soup or second chance?
-WP Click-

lovrenee

01:12:53 renee

Is there a way I can trade mush for apples or is it only apples for mush?

Moonfall

12:04:32 Many moons, one me

I just got into a fight with my mother and now my orange girl kitty refuses to leave my side

SixBears

12:02:21 evebot

Seems so. Can you please put it in the bug forum?

Siku of Kinapak

12:01:05 Siku

Hmm. Hot spring fed everyone but didn't heal everyone. DH healed to 100 instead of 150. A few other wolves didn't heal at all. Is this a new glitch?

11:41:39 Toliska, Desti, Coy

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11:12:51 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales thanks may take you up on an offer

11:09:57 tern | they/he

andy
i can imagine :'0
awww poor baby :(

11:04:16 Andy [he/they]

Scooby has been squealing every time I stand up because he was there when i first fell over from the Hypotension -_-

11:03:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Yeah it was horrible lol. And thanks!

11:01:00 tern | they/he

andy
ohhh yeah thats a nasty combination
glad youre doing better now though ^^

10:59:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Im doing way better now! Low blood pressure and dehydration, pretty much.

10:55:43 tern | they/he

andy
oh geez are you okay?

10:55:03 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
<3
My pms are open if you like

10:54:05 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales maybe and welcome

10:53:59 Andy [he/they]

Just got back from the ER. Woohoo

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02:56:27 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@pup
It's not showing any X's?

Also, please spell your words out. Text talk/chat speak isn't allowed, with the exception to lol/lmao, omg/oml and irl

Savik

02:23:01 Nalavara

Dogwood,
That happened to me twice tonight

dogwood

02:06:00 pup

Do u guys know what's going on... I explored every tile on a level, and it says there's 3 more enemies to battle. But then I clicked on an explorers map and nothing's coming up

Continental Wolves

02:00:25 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Soup

Night Shade

01:19:20 Graves | Chaos

Soup or second chance?
-WP Click-

lovrenee

01:12:53 renee

Is there a way I can trade mush for apples or is it only apples for mush?

Moonfall

12:04:32 Many moons, one me

I just got into a fight with my mother and now my orange girl kitty refuses to leave my side

SixBears

12:02:21 evebot

Seems so. Can you please put it in the bug forum?

Siku of Kinapak

12:01:05 Siku

Hmm. Hot spring fed everyone but didn't heal everyone. DH healed to 100 instead of 150. A few other wolves didn't heal at all. Is this a new glitch?

11:41:39 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Back

11:12:51 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales thanks may take you up on an offer

11:09:57 tern | they/he

andy
i can imagine :'0
awww poor baby :(

11:04:16 Andy [he/they]

Scooby has been squealing every time I stand up because he was there when i first fell over from the Hypotension -_-

11:03:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Yeah it was horrible lol. And thanks!

11:01:00 tern | they/he

andy
ohhh yeah thats a nasty combination
glad youre doing better now though ^^

10:59:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Im doing way better now! Low blood pressure and dehydration, pretty much.

10:55:43 tern | they/he

andy
oh geez are you okay?

10:55:03 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
<3
My pms are open if you like

10:54:05 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales maybe and welcome

10:53:59 Andy [he/they]

Just got back from the ER. Woohoo

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM