Wolf Play : Critique

02:57:01 Stalking chat

Hello?
I just rolled two legendary coats in a row in wolfparty THEN two rare coats in a row

02:56:59 Edith, Edie, Stella

oop, did chat poof 0.0

02:40:55 Edith, Edie, Stella

Chat, I need help.
Honest opinions; do these two deserve a pelt dye or no?
1- -WP Click-
2- -WP Click-

also, which of these pups gets a dye? cuz I've already decided one will I just can't pick which one <_>
pup1- -WP Click-
pup2- -WP Click-

02:34:53 Scorpion

-WP Click-
cannot wait to put a custom coat over these two -WP Click-

02:28:29 Zephyr / Kaz

@Owl she's very pretty <3 her father is one of my wolves so I may be biased hehehe..

02:26:45 Stalking chat

-Click-

random sketch
but how we like it?
I think maybe,
more fluffy?

MLadySkylar

02:26:29 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Chat

Owlstar

02:25:03 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- New girlie from wild and I decided that she and celestial would be twinning XDD they both have the same gear. Same names. One is a goddes and the other is just normal

02:14:08

-Click- cool?

02:12:31 Zephyr / Kaz

Got a DH and a HH on the same litter, what a nice present! <3

02:11:02 He/They pronouns

Scorpion,
Super cool :D

02:10:49 Scorpion

I got my first Familiar in Explore!!! a bald eagle!

02:07:09 He/They pronouns

Silly :D
Paws?
-WP Click-

02:06:19

ok*

02:05:56

-Click-

Feiella

02:04:24 Pack of Sharp Snap

Twinkling Star
Please spell out your words

01:58:44

Hurry

01:56:10

Nice colors, but I think literal images of corals or fish on wolves is tad unrealistic ^^""" I know that this game is not the greatest example of realism, but a fish art looks more like it would be a cool gear than a pelt pattern

01:53:58

-Click- cool or no?

01:33:52 Stalking chat

-WP Click-

wow did I mess up his weather vitals bad

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02:57:01 Stalking chat

Hello?
I just rolled two legendary coats in a row in wolfparty THEN two rare coats in a row

02:56:59 Edith, Edie, Stella

oop, did chat poof 0.0

02:40:55 Edith, Edie, Stella

02:34:53 Scorpion

-WP Click-
cannot wait to put a custom coat over these two -WP Click-

02:28:29 Zephyr / Kaz

@Owl she's very pretty <3 her father is one of my wolves so I may be biased hehehe..

02:26:45 Stalking chat

-Click-

random sketch
but how we like it?
I think maybe,
more fluffy?

MLadySkylar

02:26:29 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Chat

Owlstar

02:25:03 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- New girlie from wild and I decided that she and celestial would be twinning XDD they both have the same gear. Same names. One is a goddes and the other is just normal

02:14:08

-Click- cool?

02:12:31 Zephyr / Kaz

Got a DH and a HH on the same litter, what a nice present! <3

02:11:02 He/They pronouns

Scorpion,
Super cool :D

02:10:49 Scorpion

I got my first Familiar in Explore!!! a bald eagle!

02:07:09 He/They pronouns

Silly :D
Paws?
-WP Click-

02:06:19

ok*

02:05:56

-Click-

Feiella

02:04:24 Pack of Sharp Snap

Twinkling Star
Please spell out your words

01:58:44

Hurry

01:56:10

01:53:58

-Click- cool or no?

01:33:52 Stalking chat

-WP Click-

wow did I mess up his weather vitals bad

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM