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Yayy :D

03:18:29 Stalking chat

Only need 15 more puppies born in my den till I get more den space from Specializations

02:55:48 Winter

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Indeed and hw and a g1 boost

02:53:06 tiger\Owl|she\her

Decent vitals

02:52:12 Winter

I seriously have no clue what to do with this girl she's no use to me but she might be a good breeder >.> -WP Click-

02:47:36 tiger\Owl|she\her

I wish I did. One of my girl is gonna pop in a day or two. Maybe of theirs a girlie from the littler I don’t want you can have her.

02:45:24

Anyone have any females all of mine died today except for 1

Eye of Eternity

02:38:01 tern | they/he

nrc
oooh hes so cool :00 i can see how that hair would be a pain to colour but it looks great

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02:35:54 NRC/Raven

Well I'm off to watch tv goodbye

02:35:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a rp pm me im bored or chat i need stuff to do

Night Raven College

02:32:01 NRC/Raven

I like his hair the most honestly

02:31:51 tiger\Owl|she\her

👏👏👏👏👏👏

Night Raven College

02:31:14 NRC/Raven

-Click-

Done

Eye of Eternity

02:30:24 tern | they/he

this was probably the easiest assignment ive done this semester all i had to do was write some text </3

Eye of Eternity

02:29:44 tern | they/he

bug
hell yeah :3

02:29:37 tiger\Owl|she\her

Epicccccccc

02:29:27 Lucky Ladybug

Tern
I actually love those

Eye of Eternity

02:28:38 tern | they/he

what do we think
i also made lorem ipsum versions
-Click- -Click-

02:25:48 Lucky Ladybug

Tern
I have no idea, but it would be cool to do both!

Night Raven College

02:08:45 NRC/Raven

My OC is a Phoenix humanoid thing and his hair is red orange and yellow and this is taking forever to color 😂

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Yayy :D

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Only need 15 more puppies born in my den till I get more den space from Specializations

02:55:48 Winter

Tiger
Indeed and hw and a g1 boost

02:53:06 tiger\Owl|she\her

Decent vitals

02:52:12 Winter

I seriously have no clue what to do with this girl she's no use to me but she might be a good breeder >.> -WP Click-

02:47:36 tiger\Owl|she\her

I wish I did. One of my girl is gonna pop in a day or two. Maybe of theirs a girlie from the littler I don’t want you can have her.

02:45:24

Anyone have any females all of mine died today except for 1

Eye of Eternity

02:38:01 tern | they/he

nrc
oooh hes so cool :00 i can see how that hair would be a pain to colour but it looks great

Night Raven College

02:35:54 NRC/Raven

Well I'm off to watch tv goodbye

02:35:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a rp pm me im bored or chat i need stuff to do

Night Raven College

02:32:01 NRC/Raven

I like his hair the most honestly

02:31:51 tiger\Owl|she\her

👏👏👏👏👏👏

Night Raven College

02:31:14 NRC/Raven

-Click-

Done

Eye of Eternity

02:30:24 tern | they/he

this was probably the easiest assignment ive done this semester all i had to do was write some text </3

Eye of Eternity

02:29:44 tern | they/he

bug
hell yeah :3

02:29:37 tiger\Owl|she\her

Epicccccccc

02:29:27 Lucky Ladybug

Tern
I actually love those

Eye of Eternity

02:28:38 tern | they/he

what do we think
i also made lorem ipsum versions
-Click- -Click-

02:25:48 Lucky Ladybug

Tern
I have no idea, but it would be cool to do both!

Night Raven College

02:08:45 NRC/Raven

My OC is a Phoenix humanoid thing and his hair is red orange and yellow and this is taking forever to color 😂

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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