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 Owlstar
09:07:27 tiger\Owl|she\her
tiger digs a hole.
Stats: Perception +2
Mood: Sneaky um...thats...nice...
 Owlstar
09:04:53 tiger\Owl|she\her
immmmmm back!! I got to draw most the time XDD
 St. Cloverbeast
08:49:19 Will
Woahh
Multiple Xan
 Xanthia
08:46:15 Vash | Xy
Ima go take a nap xD but I hope you have a good rest of your day
 Xanthia
08:45:45 Vash | Xy
Your fine ^^
 Xanthius
08:44:18 Xan
sorry i poofed for a sec
 Xanthius
08:44:01 Xan
vash
yeah im in america it sucks here
 Xanthia
08:39:30 Vash | Xy
I think it's cause my countries location
 Xanthia
08:38:29 Vash | Xy
Xan
Yeah this side we don't use it I've like never heard of it xD except the use of it overseas
 Xanthius
08:33:17 Xan
Vash
i didnt know some people dont have that???
 Xanthia
08:31:52 Vash | Xy
I don't blame you we don't have that here but it confuses me xD

I really just need to fix my sleep but that's boring xD
 Xanthius
08:29:33 Xan
Vash
i only have to sing for like 30 more mins lol

i get that i swear daylight savings is still messing with me
 Xanthia
08:28:10 Vash | Xy
I hope you don't have to sing too long
It's going I'm very tried xD
 Xanthius
08:27:01 Xan
Vash
how about you
 Xanthius
08:26:54 Xan
Vash
im being forced to sing for school right now and my voice is failing so bad lol
 Xanthia
08:26:22 Vash | Xy
Xan
How's it going?
 Xanthius
08:25:56 Xan
Vash
Helloooo :DDD
 Xanthia
08:25:39 Vash | Xy
Xan :DD
 Doodle Dragon
08:24:23 He/They pronouns
Tallula,
Helloo, how are you?
 Xanthius
08:24:05 Xan
doodle
thanksss

owl
its hopefully just a cold

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 Owlstar
09:07:27 tiger\Owl|she\her
tiger digs a hole.
Stats: Perception +2
Mood: Sneaky um...thats...nice...
 Owlstar
09:04:53 tiger\Owl|she\her
immmmmm back!! I got to draw most the time XDD
 St. Cloverbeast
08:49:19 Will
Woahh
Multiple Xan
 Xanthia
08:46:15 Vash | Xy
Ima go take a nap xD but I hope you have a good rest of your day
 Xanthia
08:45:45 Vash | Xy
Your fine ^^
 Xanthius
08:44:18 Xan
sorry i poofed for a sec
 Xanthius
08:44:01 Xan
vash
yeah im in america it sucks here
 Xanthia
08:39:30 Vash | Xy
I think it's cause my countries location
 Xanthia
08:38:29 Vash | Xy
Xan
Yeah this side we don't use it I've like never heard of it xD except the use of it overseas
 Xanthius
08:33:17 Xan
Vash
i didnt know some people dont have that???
 Xanthia
08:31:52 Vash | Xy
I don't blame you we don't have that here but it confuses me xD

I really just need to fix my sleep but that's boring xD
 Xanthius
08:29:33 Xan
Vash
i only have to sing for like 30 more mins lol

i get that i swear daylight savings is still messing with me
 Xanthia
08:28:10 Vash | Xy
I hope you don't have to sing too long
It's going I'm very tried xD
 Xanthius
08:27:01 Xan
Vash
how about you
 Xanthius
08:26:54 Xan
Vash
im being forced to sing for school right now and my voice is failing so bad lol
 Xanthia
08:26:22 Vash | Xy
Xan
How's it going?
 Xanthius
08:25:56 Xan
Vash
Helloooo :DDD
 Xanthia
08:25:39 Vash | Xy
Xan :DD
 Doodle Dragon
08:24:23 He/They pronouns
Tallula,
Helloo, how are you?
 Xanthius
08:24:05 Xan
doodle
thanksss

owl
its hopefully just a cold




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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