Need some criticism
https://xxwolfdawgxx.deviantart.com/art/A-commission-720774114
I used sketch.io and DA.Muro (blending)
Fall Month: 1 
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Hurricane | Chatbox |
| Owlstar |
| Uuuuug I have to go to church (no offense to anyone) I just really don’t like it. Too much jabber much too loud, and really really boring. I DONT WANNA GOOOOOOOO |
| Serpents |
| -WP Click- what name sounds cooler for his last name(pm me it please ) Arcite Taurus Nocturne Hyberion Arce Durai Bloodtide Nightshade Whitesun |
| snake |
| tern oo, that's epic :o Tea I'm still very happy with what I have so far, so I think/hope you'll like everything lol <3 plus i feel this week will be very good for art 🙂↕️ |
| The Tea Drinkers |
| Snake It’s absolutely not a big deal at all! Take all the time in the world, I have no deadlines or anything :) |
| Eye of Eternity |
| hasturposting in the big 26 😔 (spoilers for searching for/destroying a world that doesnt exist) -Click- |
| snake |
| Tea sorry for art is still not done :c it gives me frustration that I haven't completed them yet 😔 but they will be beautiful >:D glad to see you though! how have you been :o |
| snake |
| tern oh okay, my brain must be just now registered it very nice :D usually I just hit the page number to refresh ;-; |
| Quests |
| Alliance Battles |
| Challenges |
 | Wolverine : -3 |
| Jaguar : -5 |
| Cougar : -5 |
| Chatbox |
| Owlstar |
| Uuuuug I have to go to church (no offense to anyone) I just really don’t like it. Too much jabber much too loud, and really really boring. I DONT WANNA GOOOOOOOO |
| Serpents |
| -WP Click- what name sounds cooler for his last name(pm me it please ) Arcite Taurus Nocturne Hyberion Arce Durai Bloodtide Nightshade Whitesun |
| snake |
| tern oo, that's epic :o Tea I'm still very happy with what I have so far, so I think/hope you'll like everything lol <3 plus i feel this week will be very good for art 🙂↕️ |
| The Tea Drinkers |
| Snake It’s absolutely not a big deal at all! Take all the time in the world, I have no deadlines or anything :) |
| Eye of Eternity |
| hasturposting in the big 26 😔 (spoilers for searching for/destroying a world that doesnt exist) -Click- |
| snake |
| Tea sorry for art is still not done :c it gives me frustration that I haven't completed them yet 😔 but they will be beautiful >:D glad to see you though! how have you been :o |
| snake |
| tern oh okay, my brain must be just now registered it very nice :D usually I just hit the page number to refresh ;-; |
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