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12:04:34 Andy [he/they]
-Click- i think it is mermaid and joy flavored
 Winterfell
12:02:18 Winter
Ooo a lapis dye
 Ezranian
12:01:55 ezra, he/him
ugh i need to do a homework. why did i decide to go to college lol
 Eye of Eternity
11:58:40 tern | they/he
eer
hell yeah :33
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My stepfather drove like an hour and a half to bring me an energy drink😭
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Eyeguy
Im already thinking of ideas XD
 Eye of Eternity
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eer
wait you should :0
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Lucky
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Eyeguy
I knowww :3 I really want to design an oc based off of them now haha
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I'm trying to draw an OC but I dont know how I feel about it...
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Geen
Cloudy got to it first lol
 Eye of Eternity
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eer
aww what a little guy :0
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Sleep
I got aquamarine , topaz and tourmaline
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oop nevermind
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Buggy
South carolina :D near a river
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11:53:00 
Andy
He needs to get the -perfect- fry, give him more obviously >:(
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Geen
Where do you live?
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Cloudy
Yay haha
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Ezra
Ah it is that guy X3 thank you so much <3
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got to name wolves today and do art, and stuff XD
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Evergreen
Ooooh, looks like an eight-spotted forester moth. You are the chosen one ;)

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 Andypaws
12:04:34 Andy [he/they]
-Click- i think it is mermaid and joy flavored
 Winterfell
12:02:18 Winter
Ooo a lapis dye
 Ezranian
12:01:55 ezra, he/him
ugh i need to do a homework. why did i decide to go to college lol
 Eye of Eternity
11:58:40 tern | they/he
eer
hell yeah :33
 Andypaws
11:58:01 Andy [he/they]
My stepfather drove like an hour and a half to bring me an energy drink😭
 EvergreenHills
11:57:54 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Im already thinking of ideas XD
 Eye of Eternity
11:57:04 tern | they/he
eer
wait you should :0
 EvergreenHills
11:55:15 Juicy Arm Boy
Lucky
Okay XD

Eyeguy
I knowww :3 I really want to design an oc based off of them now haha
 Night Raven College
11:54:11 NRC/Raven
I'm trying to draw an OC but I dont know how I feel about it...
 BuggyOs
11:53:42 Lucky Ladybug
Geen
Cloudy got to it first lol
 Eye of Eternity
11:53:37 tern | they/he
eer
aww what a little guy :0
 Winterfell
11:53:26 Winter
Sleep
I got aquamarine , topaz and tourmaline
 BuggyOs
11:53:18 Lucky Ladybug
oop nevermind
 EvergreenHills
11:53:16 Juicy Arm Boy
Buggy
South carolina :D near a river
 Cloudy bird
11:53:00 
Andy
He needs to get the -perfect- fry, give him more obviously >:(
 BuggyOs
11:52:49 Lucky Ladybug
Geen
Where do you live?
 EvergreenHills
11:52:39 Juicy Arm Boy
Cloudy
Yay haha
 EvergreenHills
11:52:33 Juicy Arm Boy
Ezra
Ah it is that guy X3 thank you so much <3
 Serpents
11:52:11 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
got to name wolves today and do art, and stuff XD
 Cloudy bird
11:52:08 
Evergreen
Ooooh, looks like an eight-spotted forester moth. You are the chosen one ;)




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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