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@Sir skales thanks may take you up on an offer

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andy
i can imagine :'0
awww poor baby :(

11:04:16 Andy [he/they]

Scooby has been squealing every time I stand up because he was there when i first fell over from the Hypotension -_-

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Yeah it was horrible lol. And thanks!

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11:01:00 tern | they/he

andy
ohhh yeah thats a nasty combination
glad youre doing better now though ^^

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Tern

Im doing way better now! Low blood pressure and dehydration, pretty much.

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oh geez are you okay?

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@Sir skales maybe and welcome

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Just got back from the ER. Woohoo

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i cant tell if i love or hate the moon faced man hes so weird he gives me bad vibes but in such an endearing way??

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@Nin
Im sorry your only okayish. Do you want to talk about it

Thank you

10:45:53 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@sir skales eh okayish hope you feel better

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@Nin
Not very good read now. I am really stressed and in lots of pain.

How are you doing though

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@sir skales how are you?

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Hello Nin :)

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hi sir skales

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Ugh.. I hate how shaky my fingers and hand are / are becoming

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11:12:51 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales thanks may take you up on an offer

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11:09:57 tern | they/he

andy
i can imagine :'0
awww poor baby :(

11:04:16 Andy [he/they]

Scooby has been squealing every time I stand up because he was there when i first fell over from the Hypotension -_-

11:03:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Yeah it was horrible lol. And thanks!

Eye of Eternity

11:01:00 tern | they/he

andy
ohhh yeah thats a nasty combination
glad youre doing better now though ^^

10:59:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Im doing way better now! Low blood pressure and dehydration, pretty much.

Eye of Eternity

10:55:43 tern | they/he

andy
oh geez are you okay?

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10:55:03 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
<3
My pms are open if you like

10:54:05 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales maybe and welcome

10:53:59 Andy [he/they]

Just got back from the ER. Woohoo

Eye of Eternity

10:53:54 tern | they/he

i cant tell if i love or hate the moon faced man hes so weird he gives me bad vibes but in such an endearing way??

Destinations End

10:48:52 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
Im sorry your only okayish. Do you want to talk about it

Thank you

10:45:53 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@sir skales eh okayish hope you feel better

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10:42:29 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
Not very good read now. I am really stressed and in lots of pain.

How are you doing though

10:40:26 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@sir skales how are you?

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10:40:13 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hello Nin :)

10:38:45 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

hi sir skales

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Ugh.. I hate how shaky my fingers and hand are / are becoming

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Critique please!

November 11, 2020 04:58 PM

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Exactly what the title says, critique away!

Edited at November 11, 2020 04:59 PM by Flower Field

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November 11, 2020 05:46 PM

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They lookin' mighty thick 0///0

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November 11, 2020 06:52 PM

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Lol they are thicc but gotta love that qwq

I am not a artist but for the one on the left, I think its face needs to be a bit longer like the one on the right because rats (and mice) tend to have longer faces and noses that stick out like buttons ^^

Maybe work on the toes a little if this is a comm?
Otherwise that is so cute and gorgeous! Love your style <3

Edited at November 11, 2020 06:53 PM by Crescents

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November 11, 2020 06:56 PM

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oh god

thicc rats are just what i needed

uhh tails look a bit short, I would make them just a touch longer. the noses should stick out a little more too

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November 11, 2020 06:57 PM

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I y o i n k

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November 11, 2020 07:48 PM

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I didn't even notice how thick they are at first XD

Yeah, the toes are really annoying to draw but it's not a comm so we good.

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