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 Moonfall
09:27:32 Many moons, one me
My stud Wild Moonlight threw a black phase. Why does everyone else get the luck?
 Honeybee_Falls
09:26:46 Honey
Tern,
Part of the problem is my commitment levels lol
I just have to roll with whatever I’m hyped for because the avatar I was supposed to be doing a week ago is on probation due to it being in my old style and is making me mad
 Eye of Eternity
09:24:52 tern | they/he
except when making anything that needs to be a specific size then i preset the canvas to that size
 Eye of Eternity
09:24:16 tern | they/he
honey
oh </3 i always have a high-res square (4095X4095) and then draw smaller and crop the canvas after </3
 Honeybee_Falls
09:22:39 Honey
Tern-
Pffffff
Uh so I literally just pick whatever shape looks good off of the standards. Some more detailed works are in the three thousands though
 Eye of Eternity
09:20:11 tern | they/he
honey
whats your normal canvas size?
 Honeybee_Falls
09:17:57 Honey
Tern,
Canvas size will be the ending of me
 Eye of Eternity
09:15:36 tern | they/he
honey
oh true
oh yeah theres smudged lipstick :0
i find it helps if you start with a 300 x 300 canvas (and flip the canvas regularly)
 Honeybee_Falls
09:10:45 Honey
Tern,
at least in the larger scale I can go fix the "problems." Like why's her hand so teeny tiny and now I can't see the smudged lipstick T.T
 Eye of Eternity
09:09:15 tern | they/he
honey
but it looks so good?
 Honeybee_Falls
09:07:14 Honey
Sobbing
Making an image your avatar is an eye-opening experience. The low resolution shows you the problems
 Eye of Eternity
08:58:52 tern | they/he
demon
no :( i want to make an entire a/pmv for a 4 minute song i dont have time for that </3 too much schoolwork

i also want to make walkcycles
 Demon Souls
08:56:29 Demon/Soul
Oh do it!!
 Eye of Eternity
08:56:11 tern | they/he
the urge to animate is hitting me again
 Demon Souls
08:51:38 Demon/Soul
Tern
Oh most definitely i need to compare him to two other studs I have had though didnt use them in house
 Eye of Eternity
08:47:47 tern | they/he
demon
damnnnn
thats really impressive he had a full life

hey eer :3
im alright, currently in will smith hell
how are you?
 EvergreenHills
08:46:05 Juicy Arm Boy
Heya EyeGuy :3
How are ya?
 Demon Souls
08:41:58 Demon/Soul
Tern
He was number 18 on the leaderboard by death age and all his breedings [131 in his life] were to my girls besides maybe 2-3 when he was briefly sold
 EvergreenHills
08:39:17 Juicy Arm Boy
Hello
 Eye of Eternity
08:36:53 tern | they/he
demon
awww
damnnn 29 times bred is impressive

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 Moonfall
09:27:32 Many moons, one me
My stud Wild Moonlight threw a black phase. Why does everyone else get the luck?
 Honeybee_Falls
09:26:46 Honey
Tern,
Part of the problem is my commitment levels lol
I just have to roll with whatever I’m hyped for because the avatar I was supposed to be doing a week ago is on probation due to it being in my old style and is making me mad
 Eye of Eternity
09:24:52 tern | they/he
except when making anything that needs to be a specific size then i preset the canvas to that size
 Eye of Eternity
09:24:16 tern | they/he
honey
oh </3 i always have a high-res square (4095X4095) and then draw smaller and crop the canvas after </3
 Honeybee_Falls
09:22:39 Honey
Tern-
Pffffff
Uh so I literally just pick whatever shape looks good off of the standards. Some more detailed works are in the three thousands though
 Eye of Eternity
09:20:11 tern | they/he
honey
whats your normal canvas size?
 Honeybee_Falls
09:17:57 Honey
Tern,
Canvas size will be the ending of me
 Eye of Eternity
09:15:36 tern | they/he
honey
oh true
oh yeah theres smudged lipstick :0
i find it helps if you start with a 300 x 300 canvas (and flip the canvas regularly)
 Honeybee_Falls
09:10:45 Honey
Tern,
at least in the larger scale I can go fix the "problems." Like why's her hand so teeny tiny and now I can't see the smudged lipstick T.T
 Eye of Eternity
09:09:15 tern | they/he
honey
but it looks so good?
 Honeybee_Falls
09:07:14 Honey
Sobbing
Making an image your avatar is an eye-opening experience. The low resolution shows you the problems
 Eye of Eternity
08:58:52 tern | they/he
demon
no :( i want to make an entire a/pmv for a 4 minute song i dont have time for that </3 too much schoolwork

i also want to make walkcycles
 Demon Souls
08:56:29 Demon/Soul
Oh do it!!
 Eye of Eternity
08:56:11 tern | they/he
the urge to animate is hitting me again
 Demon Souls
08:51:38 Demon/Soul
Tern
Oh most definitely i need to compare him to two other studs I have had though didnt use them in house
 Eye of Eternity
08:47:47 tern | they/he
demon
damnnnn
thats really impressive he had a full life

hey eer :3
im alright, currently in will smith hell
how are you?
 EvergreenHills
08:46:05 Juicy Arm Boy
Heya EyeGuy :3
How are ya?
 Demon Souls
08:41:58 Demon/Soul
Tern
He was number 18 on the leaderboard by death age and all his breedings [131 in his life] were to my girls besides maybe 2-3 when he was briefly sold
 EvergreenHills
08:39:17 Juicy Arm Boy
Hello
 Eye of Eternity
08:36:53 tern | they/he
demon
awww
damnnn 29 times bred is impressive




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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

IMG-1638.jpg

First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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