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01:03:53 ezra, he/him

winter-
ooh that sucks :(

01:02:49 Winter

Dude I bought 10 apples bought ONE relic space it refresh and purchased bought another one now my apples are gone ugh ;-;

01:00:15 ezra, he/him

i should have a muskox character

01:00:12 Acorn (She/Her)

Thankfully this engine isn't too terribly loud - it still hurts though :")

12:57:07 Acorn (She/Her)

Renee
She does indeed lol
She turned 8 today

12:56:06 renee

@Acorn
She knows she's that girl

12:56:03 Acorn (She/Her)

I swear if my neighbor starts up this jet engine while my sensitive young cousin is over >.>

12:50:46 Acorn (She/Her)

Renee
She said meah
Which probably means thank you or who couldn't

Also I love your avatar

12:48:50 renee

@Acorn
tell Shine I love her

12:48:21 Acorn (She/Her)

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Shine would like to share that it's her birthday today and she hasn't received her treats yet

Night Raven College

12:47:41 NRC/Raven

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I honestly hate this drawing.

12:43:39 tiger\Owl|she\her

Lol

12:43:27 Sith Happens

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Can she get a paws?

12:42:43 renee

-WP Click- she refuses to give birth </3 96 hours strong

12:37:25 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

why cant I think of boosts I could now I cant XD

12:34:54 Tito

Paw run <3

12:30:58 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

forgot pm me as im poofing

12:30:47 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone have good summery ideas for pelts? as I need more XD

12:30:07 Many moons, one me

Andy
Aww, yeah I think he'd like to be inside your skin

12:26:54 tiger\Owl|she\her

That’s what my cat Daisy does.

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01:03:53 ezra, he/him

winter-
ooh that sucks :(

01:02:49 Winter

Dude I bought 10 apples bought ONE relic space it refresh and purchased bought another one now my apples are gone ugh ;-;

01:00:15 ezra, he/him

i should have a muskox character

01:00:12 Acorn (She/Her)

Thankfully this engine isn't too terribly loud - it still hurts though :")

12:57:07 Acorn (She/Her)

Renee
She does indeed lol
She turned 8 today

12:56:06 renee

@Acorn
She knows she's that girl

12:56:03 Acorn (She/Her)

I swear if my neighbor starts up this jet engine while my sensitive young cousin is over >.>

12:50:46 Acorn (She/Her)

Renee
She said meah
Which probably means thank you or who couldn't

Also I love your avatar

12:48:50 renee

@Acorn
tell Shine I love her

12:48:21 Acorn (She/Her)

-Click-
Shine would like to share that it's her birthday today and she hasn't received her treats yet

Night Raven College

12:47:41 NRC/Raven

-Click-

I honestly hate this drawing.

12:43:39 tiger\Owl|she\her

Lol

12:43:27 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Can she get a paws?

12:42:43 renee

-WP Click- she refuses to give birth </3 96 hours strong

12:37:25 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

why cant I think of boosts I could now I cant XD

12:34:54 Tito

Paw run <3

12:30:58 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

forgot pm me as im poofing

12:30:47 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone have good summery ideas for pelts? as I need more XD

12:30:07 Many moons, one me

Andy
Aww, yeah I think he'd like to be inside your skin

12:26:54 tiger\Owl|she\her

That’s what my cat Daisy does.

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March 3, 2020 12:15 PM

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Any advice/suggestions for this - https://postimg.cc/sQftw23n

(I haven't lined it yet or put in color)

Edited at March 3, 2020 12:29 PM by Flower Field

March 3, 2020 12:19 PM

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It)s adorable! Maybe do some creams or reds when you color it in? Otherwise, beautiful!

March 3, 2020 12:51 PM

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Define the face a bit more. Other than that, it's great!

March 3, 2020 12:52 PM

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I am jealous....why

March 3, 2020 12:54 PM

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The right side of the mouth looks a tad bit distorted to me. And I think it would be rather cool if you gave a bit more attention to the 'extra' flowers or maybe choose one or two types of flowers to use in the entire piece.

Other than that, I think it looks pretty great! That's mostly just my personal opinion.

Edited at March 3, 2020 12:55 PM by Hollow_Howls

March 3, 2020 12:58 PM

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Thanks for the advice so far guys! I'm gonna work on it a bit more then post a new picture of it.

March 4, 2020 04:37 PM

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Here's one of the colored copies! (I made copies to color so I have more if I wanna change something) - https://postimg.cc/5j1YPtVv

Edited at March 4, 2020 04:38 PM by Flower Field

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