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Can I reserve a beta of Sud ill post it later tonight cause right now I'm very busy ^^ |
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Isa's Pack said:
Can I reserve a beta of Sud
as i said to spellbound, we'd like to see people's character and writing ability before allowing them to play a major role. |
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Name: Aarav Age: 7 years old Gender: Male Sexuality: Pansexual Role: Hunter Desired Role: Hunter Pack: Norden pack Appearance: Aarav is a bulky wolf, Aarav has pretty thick fur since he lives in the snowy mountains, he is a pretty fair height wolf, his fur is primarily white making only half of him blend in with the snow. but he has some gray circles all over his body and a mix of dark and light gray on his face. sadly Aarav is blind in 1 of his eyes which is his left eye, he can still see but its very blurry his other eye is a bright icy blue, the kind of blue that you would see in reflective ice. the inner of his ears have a light pink to them. 
Personality: Aarav is very to himself, he doesn’t talk to anyone if it’s not necessary. He has no filter and he will say mean things without hesitation or considering your feelings. He doesn’t take disrespect lightly Especially when they talk about his eye. He cannot take jokes at all he will take them serious. he envy's social butterfly wolfs because he never learned how to properly communicate and he wonders how it is so easy for them to talk to others without being nervous or feeling like they're talking too much. even though he is partially blind in one eye he can still do just as much as any other wolf but because of his eye he pushes himself harder everyday. Backstory: Aarav was born with his defected left eye due to him being born in late april. Since he was born with a defected eye after he turned two years old his old pack alpha kicked him out because he thought he wouldnt be able to support the pack. After Aarave was kicked from his old pack he had to hunt and survive on his own which he was pretty good at hunting down animal's with his keen nose Relations: None at the moment, pm if you wish to be related to Aarav or anything else Infected?: No Rp example: Aarav would look up into the black starry sky after he had woken up from his nap walking out of the front of his den to go look at the stars closer, he could hear all the crickets chirping as he walked up to a boulder to sit on it and reminise about old times, he jumped up on top of the large boulder, he then sat down and looked to the dark black sky it looked sort of like a milky way. Aarav then thought about all the good times he had spent with his mother before he had gotten kicked out of his old pack. he rememberd this one time when his mother, Aesther took him out for a walk it was super dark outside but there were fireflies that lit up their path. "i love you, you know that right?" Aesther had stopped walking to turn to Aarav. Aarav had picked his head up to reply to his mother, "yeah i know mom" he looked her in her light green eyes, she is so beautiful he thought to himself. "we should head back the pack might start to get worried" she said straightforwardly "ill race ya" she nudged me pushing me over to the side. "bet you wont beat me" i said loudly to her before i ran off Other: pencil |
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catharcist said:
Isa's Pack said:
Can I reserve a beta of Sud
as i said to spellbound, we'd like to see people's character and writing ability before allowing them to play a major role.
I wouldn't say my writing skill is very good. I can PM you later something to show you how I rp ok? I can make the form now if you want. |
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Isa's Pack said:
catharcist said:
Isa's Pack said:
Can I reserve a beta of Sud
as i said to spellbound, we'd like to see people's character and writing ability before allowing them to play a major role.
I wouldn't say my writing skill is very good. I can PM you later something to show you how I rp ok?
... as i said i'd like to see the character too, so it'd be nice if you posted your completed character and maybe put "beta" in their desired role |
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catharcist said:
Isa's Pack said:
catharcist said:
Isa's Pack said:
Can I reserve a beta of Sud
as i said to spellbound, we'd like to see people's character and writing ability before allowing them to play a major role.
I wouldn't say my writing skill is very good. I can PM you later something to show you how I rp ok?
... as i said i'd like to see the character too, so it'd be nice if you posted your completed character and maybe put "beta" in their desired role
I said i can do the form now.. |
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Name: Aarav Age: 4 years old Gender: Male Sexuality: Likes what he likes Role: Gamma Hunter Desired Role: Gamma Hunter Pack: Norden pack Appearance: Aarav is a bulky and slim alaskin wolf, he is a pretty fair height wolf, his fur is a dark grey and white making half of him blend in with the snow. sadly Aarav is blind in 1 of his eyes which is his left eye, he can still see but its very blurry his other eye is a bright blue Personality: Aarav is very to himself, he doesn’t talk to anyone if it’s not necessary. He has no filter and he will say mean things without hesitation or considering your feelings. He doesn’t take disrespect lightly Especially when they talk about his eye. He cannot take jokes at all he will take them serious. he envis social butterfly wolfs because he never learned how to properly comunicate and he wonders how it is so easy for them to talk to others without being nervous or feeling like theyre talking too much. even though he is partially blinde in one eye he can still do just as much as any other wolf but because of his eye he pushes himself harder everyday. Backstory: When aarav was younger he was bullied and left behind because his pack had found out about his eye and thought he wouldn’t be able to take care of himself or hunt for the pack so the alpha from his pack kicked him out and he became rogue his mother had no say or else she would have been kicked out too. Relations: None at the moment, pm if you wish to be realated to Aarav or anything else Infected?: No Rp example: Aarav would wake up to the quiet sound of birds chirping, he would strut out of his den making paw prints in the snow, annoyed at how the snow would make noise everytime he would walk, he rolled his eyes and kept walking forward, squinting his eyes because of how bright it was he shook his head and then he got on the hunt for tracks left behind from a mountain hare. he quickly put his nose to the ground for tracks of a mountain hare after smelling the ground for a while he had finally gotten sight of the mountain hare, he lowerd his body getting ready to pounce, he then pounced on the small hare moving his whole body into one spot sinking his sharp cainines on the hare's neck shaking his head back and forth so the hare stops moving Other: pencil
i'm afraid i have to deny this. "likes what he likes" isn't really a decent term for sexuality, try "pansexual". gamma is a major role, as well aarav being a little too young for the role since it requires the wolf to be experienced, not a newly made hunter. "bulky" and "slim" don't go together. You only put two sentences for appearence when a minimum of 5 is required, he cannot be an alaskan wolf, because this roleplay is set in switzerland. in europe. you only did 5 sentences for personality when there is a required minimum of seven, backstory is too short, unclear and also a little unrealistic, incorrect codeword and due to your level of spelling and word count, you are below the level of literacy required for this roleplay, sorry. |
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catharcist said:
Nueva said:
Name: Aarav Age: 4 years old Gender: Male Sexuality: Likes what he likes Role: Gamma Hunter Desired Role: Gamma Hunter Pack: Norden pack Appearance: Aarav is a bulky and slim alaskin wolf, he is a pretty fair height wolf, his fur is a dark grey and white making half of him blend in with the snow. sadly Aarav is blind in 1 of his eyes which is his left eye, he can still see but its very blurry his other eye is a bright blue Personality: Aarav is very to himself, he doesn’t talk to anyone if it’s not necessary. He has no filter and he will say mean things without hesitation or considering your feelings. He doesn’t take disrespect lightly Especially when they talk about his eye. He cannot take jokes at all he will take them serious. he envis social butterfly wolfs because he never learned how to properly comunicate and he wonders how it is so easy for them to talk to others without being nervous or feeling like theyre talking too much. even though he is partially blinde in one eye he can still do just as much as any other wolf but because of his eye he pushes himself harder everyday. Backstory: When aarav was younger he was bullied and left behind because his pack had found out about his eye and thought he wouldn’t be able to take care of himself or hunt for the pack so the alpha from his pack kicked him out and he became rogue his mother had no say or else she would have been kicked out too. Relations: None at the moment, pm if you wish to be realated to Aarav or anything else Infected?: No Rp example: Aarav would wake up to the quiet sound of birds chirping, he would strut out of his den making paw prints in the snow, annoyed at how the snow would make noise everytime he would walk, he rolled his eyes and kept walking forward, squinting his eyes because of how bright it was he shook his head and then he got on the hunt for tracks left behind from a mountain hare. he quickly put his nose to the ground for tracks of a mountain hare after smelling the ground for a while he had finally gotten sight of the mountain hare, he lowerd his body getting ready to pounce, he then pounced on the small hare moving his whole body into one spot sinking his sharp cainines on the hare's neck shaking his head back and forth so the hare stops moving Other: pencil
i'm afraid i have to deny this. "likes what he likes" isn't really a decent term for sexuality, try "pansexual". gamma is a major role, as well aarav being a little too young for the role since it requires the wolf to be experienced, not a newly made hunter. "bulky" and "slim" don't go together. You only put two sentences for appearence when a minimum of 5 is required, he cannot be an alaskan wolf, because this roleplay is set in switzerland. in europe. you only did 5 sentences for personality when there is a required minimum of seven, backstory is too short, unclear and also a little unrealistic, incorrect codeword and due to your level of spelling and word count, you are below the level of literacy required for this roleplay, sorry.
oh okay, do you want me to change the mistakes? |
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