Wolf Play : Criticism?

05:09:10 Juicy Arm Boy

Acorn
Okayyy

05:08:41 Kaos || Kháos

Ever-
Ooh, good luck!

Empress Midnight

05:08:39 Lucky Frog Empress

Juicy

Beach Vibes

Acornclan

05:08:38 Acorn (She/Her)

Beanie
Coastal

cloudpack

05:07:18 cloud (he/they)

uncle

hi

05:07:06 Juicy Arm Boy

Owl
I have no idea TwT I’m gonna ask chat for name ideas LMAO

And thank you <333

Owlstar

05:06:22 tiger\Owl|she\her

Evergreen what are you gonna call it? I like it too :3

Xanthia

05:06:06 Vash | Xy

Empress Midnight

05:05:59 Lucky Frog Empress

Juicy

You’re welcome

05:05:00 Juicy Arm Boy

Empress
Thank you <3

Empress Midnight

05:02:04 Lucky Frog Empress

Juicy

I like it!

05:01:56 Juicy Arm Boy

Khans
Yeah they do haha

Thank youu <3 first time entering OwO

05:01:20 Kaos || Kháos

The feet feel off, but it looks gorgeous otherwise!

05:00:26 Juicy Arm Boy

Thoughts? Might change the feet -Click-

04:59:49 Kaos || Kháos

I wish you luck! I would have gone down a medical route, but I unfortunately cannot stomach too much.

CHEF

04:55:43 🍳

I’m trying to go for medicine but it’s a loooong route

Xanthia

04:54:35 Vash | Xy

I feel like my nap that I took needs a nap because I'm still super tired but I don't want to sleep😭

04:54:11 Kaos || Kháos

I'm not sure yet, but I know that I want coding to be a huge part of my life and my advisors said that based on what I told them, cyber defense would be the best major for me to go for!

CHEF

04:52:34 🍳

Cyber defense!
That’s so cool
Are you trying to work for the CIA or other intelligence agencies in the future?

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January 3, 2018 11:40 PM

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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo

January 4, 2018 12:21 AM

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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.

January 29, 2018 07:06 PM

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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3

January 29, 2018 10:16 PM

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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer

January 29, 2018 10:41 PM