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09:07:27 tiger\Owl|she\her

tiger digs a hole.
Stats: Perception +2
Mood: Sneaky um...thats...nice...

09:04:53 tiger\Owl|she\her

immmmmm back!! I got to draw most the time XDD

St. Cloverbeast

08:49:19 Will

Woahh
Multiple Xan

08:46:15 Vash | Xy

Ima go take a nap xD but I hope you have a good rest of your day

08:45:45 Vash | Xy

Your fine ^^

08:44:18 Xan

sorry i poofed for a sec

08:44:01 Xan

vash
yeah im in america it sucks here

08:39:30 Vash | Xy

I think it's cause my countries location

08:38:29 Vash | Xy

Xan
Yeah this side we don't use it I've like never heard of it xD except the use of it overseas

08:33:17 Xan

Vash
i didnt know some people dont have that???

08:31:52 Vash | Xy

I don't blame you we don't have that here but it confuses me xD

I really just need to fix my sleep but that's boring xD

08:29:33 Xan

Vash
i only have to sing for like 30 more mins lol

i get that i swear daylight savings is still messing with me

08:28:10 Vash | Xy

I hope you don't have to sing too long
It's going I'm very tried xD

08:27:01 Xan

Vash
how about you

08:26:54 Xan

Vash
im being forced to sing for school right now and my voice is failing so bad lol

08:26:22 Vash | Xy

Xan
How's it going?

08:25:56 Xan

Vash
Helloooo :DDD

08:25:39 Vash | Xy

Xan :DD

08:24:23 He/They pronouns

Tallula,
Helloo, how are you?

08:24:05 Xan

doodle
thanksss

owl
its hopefully just a cold

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09:07:27 tiger\Owl|she\her

tiger digs a hole.
Stats: Perception +2
Mood: Sneaky um...thats...nice...

09:04:53 tiger\Owl|she\her

immmmmm back!! I got to draw most the time XDD

St. Cloverbeast

08:49:19 Will

Woahh
Multiple Xan

08:46:15 Vash | Xy

Ima go take a nap xD but I hope you have a good rest of your day

08:45:45 Vash | Xy

Your fine ^^

08:44:18 Xan

sorry i poofed for a sec

08:44:01 Xan

vash
yeah im in america it sucks here

08:39:30 Vash | Xy

I think it's cause my countries location

08:38:29 Vash | Xy

Xan
Yeah this side we don't use it I've like never heard of it xD except the use of it overseas

08:33:17 Xan

Vash
i didnt know some people dont have that???

08:31:52 Vash | Xy

I don't blame you we don't have that here but it confuses me xD

I really just need to fix my sleep but that's boring xD

08:29:33 Xan

Vash
i only have to sing for like 30 more mins lol

i get that i swear daylight savings is still messing with me

08:28:10 Vash | Xy

I hope you don't have to sing too long
It's going I'm very tried xD

08:27:01 Xan

Vash
how about you

08:26:54 Xan

Vash
im being forced to sing for school right now and my voice is failing so bad lol

08:26:22 Vash | Xy

Xan
How's it going?

08:25:56 Xan

Vash
Helloooo :DDD

08:25:39 Vash | Xy

Xan :DD

08:24:23 He/They pronouns

Tallula,
Helloo, how are you?

08:24:05 Xan

doodle
thanksss

owl
its hopefully just a cold

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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