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07:46:37 AW

I'm trying to decide if its worth putting health potions on my DH wolves that have 98 and 100 points before fighting her lol

07:44:35 Stalking chat

AW,
100

07:44:21 AW

Does Eve hit for 90 or 100? I dont remember

07:44:11 Stalking chat

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tounge blep :p
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Eye of Eternity

07:36:29 tern | they/he

never mind

Eye of Eternity

07:33:23 tern | they/he

hey chat pose 1 or pose 2

Eye of Eternity

07:27:57 tern | they/he

moonfall
no problem ^^

07:22:33 Many moons, one me

Aww, thanks Eye 😁

07:22:29 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me im bored or a chat

07:17:26 Many moons, one me

902 total moves and praying tundra is generous... Will I have to sacrifice a pup to appease the wp gods? Only time will tell

07:17:25 ezra, he/him

-WP Click- to be fair to me though he's a dh

Night Raven College

07:17:03 NRC/Raven

Well off I go to try and pay attention to my show now, bye

07:16:21 ezra, he/him

any day now i will stop randomly buying every wolf i think is pretty

Night Raven College

07:15:07 NRC/Raven

I would

07:14:28 Many moons, one me

Should I buy 860 explore moves and keep trying?

Night Raven College

07:14:17 NRC/Raven

You can do it Moon!!!

07:13:13 Many moons, one me

60 shamrocks til 700...
It's probably doable but explore is being skimpy on the shammies lately

Night Raven College

07:10:19 NRC/Raven

Oh my show is making a twist and I paused at the worst part lol

07:09:25 Cyber / Onion

Ayyy it's just being weird for me then

Night Raven College

07:07:06 NRC/Raven

Cyber
I saw the emoji

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07:46:37 AW

I'm trying to decide if its worth putting health potions on my DH wolves that have 98 and 100 points before fighting her lol

07:44:35 Stalking chat

AW,
100

07:44:21 AW

Does Eve hit for 90 or 100? I dont remember

07:44:11 Stalking chat

-Click-

tounge blep :p
How do we think?

Eye of Eternity

07:36:29 tern | they/he

never mind

Eye of Eternity

07:33:23 tern | they/he

hey chat pose 1 or pose 2

Eye of Eternity

07:27:57 tern | they/he

moonfall
no problem ^^

07:22:33 Many moons, one me

Aww, thanks Eye 😁

07:22:29 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me im bored or a chat

07:17:26 Many moons, one me

902 total moves and praying tundra is generous... Will I have to sacrifice a pup to appease the wp gods? Only time will tell

07:17:25 ezra, he/him

-WP Click- to be fair to me though he's a dh

Night Raven College

07:17:03 NRC/Raven

Well off I go to try and pay attention to my show now, bye

07:16:21 ezra, he/him

any day now i will stop randomly buying every wolf i think is pretty

Night Raven College

07:15:07 NRC/Raven

I would

07:14:28 Many moons, one me

Should I buy 860 explore moves and keep trying?

Night Raven College

07:14:17 NRC/Raven

You can do it Moon!!!

07:13:13 Many moons, one me

60 shamrocks til 700...
It's probably doable but explore is being skimpy on the shammies lately

Night Raven College

07:10:19 NRC/Raven

Oh my show is making a twist and I paused at the worst part lol

07:09:25 Cyber / Onion

Ayyy it's just being weird for me then

Night Raven College

07:07:06 NRC/Raven

Cyber
I saw the emoji

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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