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TheFlyingKitten

11:08:03 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

I enjoy the encouraging announcer man.

11:07:53 a rock in your shoe

waterfall
name the fuckin wolves before a drink the rubber ducky hand sanitizer

11:07:45 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Bye Froggy

11:07:34 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok bye

11:07:24 Luckystorm (she/her)

Rat

See you later

11:07:23 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Owl
Yeah I can’t play it

11:07:16 a rock in your shoe

owl
real

11:07:04 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

can some one please give me motivation for naming wolves sorting thme doing the new contests, and more.... Please I need motivationXD Please

11:06:57 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok I’m off for a bit see y’all soon!

11:06:37 tiger\Owl|she\her

yo candy crush just makes me MORE stressed XDDDDD

11:06:36 Luckystorm (she/her)

Flying

I too would recommend Candy Crush

TheFlyingKitten

11:06:34 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Stormsong
It's basically Candy Crush but with a weirder ad.

11:06:18 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Candy crush lol

11:05:59 Luckystorm (she/her)

Flying

I’ve never heard of Merge Mansions

11:05:55 a rock in your shoe

petri
candy crush
swipe the stress away!

11:05:30

hello!

TheFlyingKitten

11:05:15 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Chat, what are we thinking? Merge Mansions or more Candy Crush?

11:03:25 a rock in your shoe

cyclops
he's being so alpha/silly

Night Raven College

11:02:47 NRC/Raven

Ok I'm going to go for now bye

Night Raven College

11:02:17 NRC/Raven

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TheFlyingKitten

11:08:03 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

I enjoy the encouraging announcer man.

11:07:53 a rock in your shoe

waterfall
name the fuckin wolves before a drink the rubber ducky hand sanitizer

11:07:45 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Bye Froggy

11:07:34 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok bye

11:07:24 Luckystorm (she/her)

Rat

See you later

11:07:23 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Owl
Yeah I can’t play it

11:07:16 a rock in your shoe

owl
real

11:07:04 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

can some one please give me motivation for naming wolves sorting thme doing the new contests, and more.... Please I need motivationXD Please

11:06:57 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok I’m off for a bit see y’all soon!

11:06:37 tiger\Owl|she\her

yo candy crush just makes me MORE stressed XDDDDD

11:06:36 Luckystorm (she/her)

Flying

I too would recommend Candy Crush

TheFlyingKitten

11:06:34 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Stormsong
It's basically Candy Crush but with a weirder ad.

11:06:18 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Candy crush lol

11:05:59 Luckystorm (she/her)

Flying

I’ve never heard of Merge Mansions

11:05:55 a rock in your shoe

petri
candy crush
swipe the stress away!

11:05:30

hello!

TheFlyingKitten

11:05:15 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Chat, what are we thinking? Merge Mansions or more Candy Crush?

11:03:25 a rock in your shoe

cyclops
he's being so alpha/silly

Night Raven College

11:02:47 NRC/Raven

Ok I'm going to go for now bye

Night Raven College

11:02:17 NRC/Raven

Tern
Lol

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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