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Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:06 AM


Sir Froggington

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Looking back on my critique I don't think that was helpful at all. >.<
For the top one, canine necks don't curl like a swan. That's what it looks like is happening there. Very nice eyes
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:17 AM


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Sir Froggington said:
Looking back on my critique I don't think that was helpful at all. >.<
For the top one, canine necks don't curl like a swan. That's what it looks like is happening there. Very nice eyes


No, it was very helpful! ^^
I was trying to make the head look like it was turning to face the viewer, so I'll have to work on that, aha! Thank you very much!! ^^
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:19 AM


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Oohh hmmm
My red line though was basically the same thing. I don't see how it was helpful

Edited at April 29, 2022 09:19 AM by Sir Froggington
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Love your drawing, the wolf nose could be more rectangular and the head more round, besides that it is amazing!! <3
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:23 AM


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The head is turned to face the viewer. I think you just need to flatten out the back of the neck more. (Probably not the word to describe it) You also have the body colored so you can see where the chest is
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Sir Froggington said:
Oohh hmmm
My red line though was basically the same thing. I don't see how it was helpful


Because I could see I needed to make the nose a bit longer and squarer. xD
Like, I could see what you were trying to say; I think if I made it have those proportions it would look a bit better. ^^
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Hi ^^
Just a lil tip/fyi
Wolves have pointed snouts, and their nose kinda sticks up so make a smol lil bump on the top end of the muzzle :D
And for eyes, canines have a black scel. So I normally have black instead of white around the eye, and to make eyes seem to glow you'll need to use lighter colors that make it *pop*
For example
Brown eyes, use a dark brown for base and at the bottom use a slightly light brown and then use in a small brush, light/pale yellow to make light / shining affect ^^ if I remember later I'll make a smol redline for ya <3
Hope this somewhat helps, I'm horrid at explaining lol
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:25 AM


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Glitched Souls said:
Love your drawing, the wolf nose could be more rectangular and the head more round, besides that it is amazing!! <3


Thank you so much! I'll definitely have to try that! ^^

Sir Froggington said:

The head is turned to face the viewer. I think you just need to flatten out the back of the neck more. (Probably not the word to describe it) You also have the body colored so you can see where the chest is


Oh, okay! I can see what you're saying. Thank you!! ^^

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Malina said:
Hi ^^
Just a lil tip/fyi
Wolves have pointed snouts, and their nose kinda sticks up so make a smol lil bump on the top end of the muzzle :D
And for eyes, canines have a black scel. So I normally have black instead of white around the eye, and to make eyes seem to glow you'll need to use lighter colors that make it *pop*
For example
Brown eyes, use a dark brown for base and at the bottom use a slightly light brown and then use in a small brush, light/pale yellow to make light / shining affect ^^ if I remember later I'll make a smol redline for ya <3
Hope this somewhat helps, I'm horrid at explaining lol


Ok, cool! Thank you so much!! ^^
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:31 AM


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Hope this helps :)
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Edit: oh darn it, the blue didn't show up as clear as I wanted it to, sorry >.>

Edited at April 29, 2022 09:36 AM by Malina

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