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.-. I'm a bit worried I may have made sloane a bit too unapproachable, but I guess we'll see. I feel like she's pretty much going to harbor a deep hatred for almost everyone, but secretly adore them at some point, maybe.
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I really like Sloane's character actually! While not everyone might like her at first, I am sure at least half characters will befriend her. I love it when creators make characters who are flawed and not 'good' people especially when they have so much depth and personality to them. I think you did an amazing job with her and I can't wait to see how she develops in the story and her interacts with everyone!! :D
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No worries, Garvin's going to talk to everyone practically immediately after meeting/seeing them. He doesn't care about how approachable someone is, he's going to approach them anyways. He does love to go to unapproachable people and push their buttons, after all. He's one of my only characters that could count as extroverts.
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@Determined Thank you! She's a newer character to me so I'm excited to do some character development with her. I totally agree though, like I love me a good cliche character but its entertaining when someone introduces a total asshole without an ounce of good in them. I'm honestly not quite sure how I'm going to have her react to Emery XD I feel like she's either gonna hate him or enjoy him. @Overthink :') why do I get the feeling that Garvin is going to be completely unaware of Sloanes dislike of him XD
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Ha, no, he's going to be extremely aware of her dislike towards him. But it isn't going to stop him, like, at all. He's used to people disliking him, so he just pushes past it and tries to see how much he can get them to hate him, or to like him. Either one.
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Overthink101 said: No worries, Garvin's going to talk to everyone practically immediately after meeting/seeing them. He doesn't care about how approachable someone is, he's going to approach them anyways. He does love to go to unapproachable people and push their buttons, after all. He's one of my only characters that could count as extroverts.
That's probably a good thing, considering how few characters would be inclined to interact with others of their own accord XD
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Well, he is the valiant's descendant and if she was someone who made history happen then you better bet he's going to end up being an extrovert that makes everyone talk.
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Fusty-Dudget said: .-. I'm a bit worried I may have made sloane a bit too unapproachable, but I guess we'll see. I feel like she's pretty much going to harbor a deep hatred for almost everyone, but secretly adore them at some point, maybe.
Hah, never such a thing as too unapproachable. Even if a character's an asshole, they can still have negative interactions with other characters. Plus Sloane's gonna be forced to interact with others anyway, what with all the bonds being grouped up, her bond being the first to get introduced to aforementioned group, and Garvin. Plus, like Determined_Wolf said, characters who are undeniably bad people tend to be very interesting. And Emery is they/them!
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ThisIsAPackName said: Fusty-Dudget said: .-. I'm a bit worried I may have made sloane a bit too unapproachable, but I guess we'll see. I feel like she's pretty much going to harbor a deep hatred for almost everyone, but secretly adore them at some point, maybe.
Hah, never such a thing as too unapproachable. Even if a character's an asshole, they can still have negative interactions with other characters. Plus Sloane's gonna be forced to interact with others anyway, what with all the bonds being grouped up, her bond being the first to get introduced to aforementioned group, and Garvin. Plus, like Determined_Wolf said, characters who are undeniably bad people tend to be very interesting. And Emery is they/them!
That'll be interesting o-o she's probably going to want to eliminate her bond asap, for a while at least oop- I didnt see that part, I'll make sure to keep that in mind.
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@Noctunyx - If we're going to have Garvin and Sera know each other than we should probably add them to the affiliations. What do you think their relationship was while he was working there?
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