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They do have collage stuff to do, said to dm them if we don't hear from them. They also mentioned they will be 'active as humanly possible.' This is what I got from their profile, I'll send them a message just in case, I hope their alright... the last post they made was 2 months ago.. |
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Yeah, perhaps it's college-related, hopefully nothing super serious. But yeah, there's still a chance they'll come back, so perhaps later on Sergeant Bones can get injured so he's kind of out of the plot for a while but still there? And yeah, the only ones who aren't across are Sergeant Bones and Marijana at this time. If you'd like to, maybe you could edit your post (since it was most recent) and mention that Sergeant Bones goes across and Marijana follows him. |
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Yeah, hopefully they'll return. ^^ And sure, I'll edit my post so he goes before her. I think that's a great idea so, we are able to get a move on. Don't forget to have some you time, a break every once in a while. Writing 1000k words can be a little hard sometimes but it's always worth it in the end. lol Take as much time as you need. ^^ |
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We should probably also wait for the others' input, though. They're not on right now. And don't worry, I'll be fine :) It's actually easier to write a gigantic response with prompts from these awesome roleplayers than a three-paragraph one with nothing to go off of. |
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Haha, yes. It is a lot easier when there are great writers with things to borrow from as input. Thank you, that's very kind of you. You're an amazing writer too. ^^ I'm more than happy to wait, I don't wish to start before them. So I'll wait to edit it until it's in the all clear. I was just reading some of the past posts. I noticed a couple mistakes in my last post. lmao When you write an animals 'tail' instead of 'tale' as in a story. lmao >u< Such is the life of an insomniac. You mess simple things like that up. Hehe |
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Well, little typos honestly don't matter that much if you're writing quality plot/character. As long as it's legible :) I'm a perfectionist with way too much time, so I always go over my posts at least three times. Big waste of time, in my opinion. |
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The thing is I did go over it three times. I guess my dead eyes missed everything, there is a couple mistakes that really draw a person away from my writing immediately. lmao I think it's always good to double or triple check ones writing before showing it to the world. If you don't sleep like me you're gonna need that ability. Haha |
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Yeah, Alexis falling off the bridge sounds good. If that's the case, maybe they should go last, then? I doubt that anyone would want to go after someone dies, so them going after everyone else has already went would probably be most convenient (though, admittedly, the discussion of convenience in relation to death is kind of funny in a morbid way). Shattered was last online almost two months ago, though, so we can't really wait for them to reply... getting him injured might be a good way to sideline Bone, but at that point, wouldn't he just return to the surface and never be seen again? I can't think of an explanation as to why an injured person who separated from the group basically at the very beginning would show up again farther along in the cave. |
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Well, in regards to Bone, perhaps their way is blocked when the rope snaps or something more catastrophic happens. They can only go forward. Bone is hurt a bit later along, and they have to take him with them (not sure how that would be done, but with some research I'm sure we could figure it out.) |
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Yes, that would be a good death for Alexis. Rest their soul... It would be interesting to see how the characters may feel or react in that event. As for Bone maybe he trips when he almost reaches the other end, falls gripping to a small ledge some meters down. Oh, just as Alexis falls he tries to catch them, Bone loses his grip and falls down along with them. Alexis cracks their head, for extra drama perhaps? They fall into a cave some meters down, Alexis breaking his fall with their body. Bone gets knocked out, waking up with a broken leg. Now he needs to somehow get back up and catch up with the group. Lmao, why was I laughing so hard while writing this? >u< |
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