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just keep it like that :P it's literally just a starter, and nothing extremely important is going on ^^ |
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Mine is sort of starting out with carswell thinking of the way he remembered their names. Weird random stuff |
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Idea: Someone is bored and puts a bug on someone while they are sleeping hoping to freak them out and the person just eats it and thanks the other person for the snack |
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that's what chris should've done to sadie |
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Studying while trying to keep up with anything that pops up here isn't one of the wisest decisions I've made, but fuck it. |
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Imagine? Maybe she wouldn't have been so grumpy--
queen. said:
that's what chris should've done to sadie
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keeping it mind for next time ;) |
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Writing dream sequences is legit the fucking worst. 'Cause dreams aren't really supposed to make sense but are ~emotional~, so you're kinda just sitting there wondering how the fuck you're gonna represent that.
Ciao said:
But like, mine is bad- I wanted to have an origonal start, so I half-narrated the first 4 sentences, and it's literally about a dream. Everything after that is okay, but I don't know how I should re-write the beginning lmao. It might just stay like that.
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i was gonna have chris be dreaming about his dead mummy but i didn't cause i thought it'd be more emotional if he was holding the bandanna, which i did, but it wasn't that sad at all lmao |
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Exactly, though I made it more random and less emotional in this case.
ASomeonePerson said:
Writing dream sequences is legit the fucking worst. 'Cause dreams aren't really supposed to make sense but are ~emotional~, so you're kinda just sitting there wondering how the fuck you're gonna represent that.
Ciao said:
But like, mine is bad- I wanted to have an origonal start, so I half-narrated the first 4 sentences, and it's literally about a dream. Everything after that is okay, but I don't know how I should re-write the beginning lmao. It might just stay like that.
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