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 Cybertronian
11:53:03 Cyber / Onion
Backstories can be written as scenes ;D unless i suppose yoku’re submitting to a specific project that has a format requirement?

My backstory documents are a mess. But they work.

I write scenes to get into their heads and get to know them, or to have a reference for a very crucial past moment…. I also find it more interesting and engaging so it holds my focus better.

Then i just jot down other stuff in bullet lists, the details like “has a scar on left eye.” If i’ve come up with a reason for it ill add a note to it, but idk



You could start with just some details and lists on the page, then from there, push the text around until you’ve got it restructured in the format you want?
 The Reaper
11:52:57 Reaper / Grim
Cap
I feel like he's missing something (Other than his piercings)
 Zeraphia
11:52:31 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Not at all! They're different styles and I think that's wonderful!
 Demon Mistress
11:52:21 The Scary Mod
@Cyber
Please spell out your words
 The Reaper
11:52:08 Reaper / Grim
Onion
I talk to them all the time. Like my brain has turned them into actors and I'm the director (Which means there are so many bloopers and behind the scenes)
 Zeraphia
11:51:21 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

How is it not?? The eyes are beautiful, the shading is soft and subtle--just enough to give it a little pizazz. I love it!
 The Reaper
11:51:05 Reaper / Grim
Cap
My avatar is gorgeous, that looks like my sister drew it (She's 6)
 Cybertronian
11:50:47 Cyber / Onion
*nope as in no u not the only one
 Cybertronian
11:50:33 Cyber / Onion
Nope, they pretty much live rent free in my head as muses. Injust accepted it a looong time ago xD

 The Reaper
11:50:28 Reaper / Grim
Cap
How is that gorgeous? XD
 Zeraphia
11:50:05 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

What the heck that looks absolutely fantastic???

That is gorgeous???
 The Reaper
11:49:38 Reaper / Grim
Onion
You act like they're real people too-? O-O I always thought I was the only one who used that tactic-
 Demon Mistress
11:49:12 The Scary Mod
@Cyber
The only textspeak permitted is: OMG, OML, LOL, LMAO, and IRL.
 Zeraphia
11:49:11 Space Pirate Captain
Cyber

I mean, it it's a scene-type thing, easy for me to do. I can do scenes no problem.

Backstories--that's where I want to pull my hair out. It's less of a scene and more of a ... sort of essay i guess.
 The Reaper
11:48:47 Reaper / Grim
Cap
It really doesnt thoooo
-Click-
 Cybertronian
11:48:46 Cyber / Onion
Oh lawd the apostraphes nooo
 Cybertronian
11:48:14 Cyber / Onion
@Zeraphia

When i get stuck on writing, i break it down into an interview with the character kinda.

I ask a question, maybe something i’m curious about- and then i write down the absolute first things that come to mind in response, even if it’ just stray details.

Idk if that’ll you or not, but it’s one way I’ve learned to kinda kick the creative writing flow going. It’s like removing pebbles from a damn. Eventually, you’ll build up enough details to be able to tumble right into writing a full scene.
 Zeraphia
11:47:56 Space Pirate Captain
The idea that he just now only winks is way too funny to me right now. I must be extra tired pfft
 The Reaper
11:47:12 Reaper / Grim
Cap
Blinking
 Zeraphia
11:47:08 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Nooo. It looks amazing!

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somethin just doesnt feel right, any pointers?
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I love your style so much ;O;
The only things I see that may look off are the back legs and chest? I don't spot anything else x3

I didn't give a breakdown on the anatomy cause our styles are very different and I doubt that would help you much xD


Sorry about the messy redline, I did it very quickly lol

Edited at December 27, 2021 04:11 PM by Biohazard
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Thank youu! <3
(my necks seriously need work 😂😅)
I'll definitely move the front legs back, makes it look much better
Sending apples anyways >:3
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xD You can't make me accept em >:]
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Biohazard said:
xD You can't make me accept em >:]


>:(
Im already in an 'accept my apples war' with two other people
How dare you lol
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xD it just wasn't meant to be
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Hey uh Bio
I dont know what's wrong. ;^; fix it.
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Not going to lie to you I have no clue if that's a canine or a feline
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I'm guessing feline? x'D
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omg this thread is so helpful. i dont have any sketches for you to redline, but do you have any general anatomy tips for drawing paws? i always struggle with those lol
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I struggle with them too xD I will always draw them last lol

Hopefully this helps!

Drawing bottoms of paws or curled/clenched paws will always be a hassle for me so I don't think I can help you there x'D

Edited at December 29, 2021 06:43 PM by Biohazard

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