Wolf Play : Constructive Criticism

12:03:57 Cyber / Onion

@reaper

I just put my favorites in a gallery. Then itâÂ€Â™s no pressure but sometimes it still gets updated

12:03:52

does perception help with finding pray?

12:03:22 Cyber / Onion

@the scary

Yep, trying to remember to not use apostrophies is haaaaard

Sorry for the weird symbol spam, i forgot ipads do that

Zeraphia

12:00:05 Space Pirate Captain

But man, yeah. I'll look at some of my lines and just ;-;

That looks wrong. I color it in and it looks all good

Zeraphia

11:59:39 Space Pirate Captain

Grim

It's up to you! You can try and see if you do or just leave it be.

Funny enough, aside from TH, WP is the only other place that has all of my art.

The Reaper

11:59:04 Reaper / Grim

Cap
And y'all were right, it did look better once I got it colored in.

I feel like I need to make a gallery but I can never keep up with them

Zeraphia

11:56:39 Space Pirate Captain

Grim

Eyyy there we go!

Sometimes, it just needs a little fun background to look better

Demon Mistress

11:56:27 The Scary Mod

@Cyber
Are you on mobile by chance?

The Reaper

11:56:01 Reaper / Grim

Cap
That helped a little bit
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Cybertronian

11:54:19 Cyber / Onion

@The Scary

Okie dokie!

Zeraphia

11:54:05 Space Pirate Captain

I just need it to fit in the box;
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There's no real limit to the space or whatnot but... y'know?

Zeraphia

11:53:34 Space Pirate Captain

Grim

Not at all. You could probably add a little circular background and see if that helps?

Cybertronian

11:53:03 Cyber / Onion

Backstories can be written as scenes ;D unless i suppose yokuâÂ€Â™re submitting to a specific project that has a format requirement?

My backstory documents are a mess. But they work.

I write scenes to get into their heads and get to know them, or to have a reference for a very crucial past momentâÂ€¦. I also find it more interesting and engaging so it holds my focus better.

Then i just jot down other stuff in bullet lists, the details like âÂ€Âœhas a scar on left eye.âÂ€Â If iâÂ€Â™ve come up with a reason for it ill add a note to it, but idk

You could start with just some details and lists on the page, then from there, push the text around until youâÂ€Â™ve got it restructured in the format you want?

The Reaper

11:52:57 Reaper / Grim

Cap
I feel like he's missing something (Other than his piercings)

Zeraphia

11:52:31 Space Pirate Captain

Grim

Not at all! They're different styles and I think that's wonderful!

Demon Mistress

11:52:21 The Scary Mod

@Cyber
Please spell out your words

The Reaper

11:52:08 Reaper / Grim

Onion
I talk to them all the time. Like my brain has turned them into actors and I'm the director (Which means there are so many bloopers and behind the scenes)

Zeraphia

11:51:21 Space Pirate Captain

Grim

How is it not?? The eyes are beautiful, the shading is soft and subtle--just enough to give it a little pizazz. I love it!

The Reaper

11:51:05 Reaper / Grim

Cap
My avatar is gorgeous, that looks like my sister drew it (She's 6)

Cybertronian

11:50:47 Cyber / Onion

*nope as in no u not the only one

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