Wolf Play : Critique?

05:39:35 Sith Happens

I like having 2 to 3 teams and that's it, although I used to have close to 20 teams. That was very overwhelming

05:39:33 Juicy Arm Boy

Motor oil
I’d say I’m tons of fun, thank you very much >:[
Ooh what flavour are they ?

Vax

05:38:38 a rock in your shoe

alwaysgren
you’re no fun
the art skills are yummy that’s why I eated it

05:38:12 Ace

Me too, Akira. I usually just train a bunch at the same time so they're all in the same league lol.

That being said, it is definitely a slowww process xD

Akira Fire

05:36:30 AW

I actually like training lol

05:36:23 Juicy Arm Boy

Anakin
It is </3
I’ve genuinely just stopped training except on WoW

05:35:57 Sith Happens

Training is just such a slow and boring process..

05:34:50 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

She's at over 100k in battle earnings :D

05:34:36 Juicy Arm Boy

Motor oil
Why eated my skills D: then I cannot do art </3 spit it back out in my hand now

Vax

05:33:08 a rock in your shoe

alwaysgren
i eated it

05:32:11 Ace

Holy battle earnings-

Yeah I'd do the same xD Now you HAVE to train her so she can be pretty and as good as him

05:29:49 Stalking chat

I feel as I'm gaining paws so quickly--already 122

05:29:28 Juicy Arm Boy

Why is my anthro art not anthroing
What happened to my super epic skills

05:29:04 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

I based dilemmas pelt off of one of my best battlers:)

05:28:11 Sith Happens

Yes it is! She's amazing, isn't she? :D

05:27:05 Ace

Anakin
Is that the girl you were telling me about earlier? O.O She's a pretttttyy gal.

05:23:34 Stalking chat

-WP Click-

Ugh I messed up his vitals so bad though..
just because I wanted to make him a hero

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05:40:17 a rock in your shoe

Andy
green

Vax

05:40:07 a rock in your shoe

alwaysgren
gasoline flavor
very tasty

Andypaws

05:40:07 Andy [he/they]

Blue, green, or purple?

05:39:35 Sith Happens

I like having 2 to 3 teams and that's it, although I used to have close to 20 teams. That was very overwhelming

05:39:33 Juicy Arm Boy

Motor oil
I’d say I’m tons of fun, thank you very much >:[
Ooh what flavour are they ?

Vax

05:38:38 a rock in your shoe

alwaysgren
you’re no fun
the art skills are yummy that’s why I eated it

05:38:12 Ace

Me too, Akira. I usually just train a bunch at the same time so they're all in the same league lol.

That being said, it is definitely a slowww process xD

Akira Fire

05:36:30 AW

I actually like training lol

05:36:23 Juicy Arm Boy

Anakin
It is </3
I’ve genuinely just stopped training except on WoW

05:35:57 Sith Happens

Training is just such a slow and boring process..

05:34:50 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

She's at over 100k in battle earnings :D

05:34:36 Juicy Arm Boy

Motor oil
Why eated my skills D: then I cannot do art </3 spit it back out in my hand now

Vax

05:33:08 a rock in your shoe

alwaysgren
i eated it

05:32:11 Ace

Holy battle earnings-

Yeah I'd do the same xD Now you HAVE to train her so she can be pretty and as good as him

05:29:49 Stalking chat

I feel as I'm gaining paws so quickly--already 122

05:29:28 Juicy Arm Boy

Why is my anthro art not anthroing
What happened to my super epic skills

05:29:04 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

I based dilemmas pelt off of one of my best battlers:)

05:28:11 Sith Happens

Yes it is! She's amazing, isn't she? :D

05:27:05 Ace

Anakin
Is that the girl you were telling me about earlier? O.O She's a pretttttyy gal.

05:23:34 Stalking chat

-WP Click-

Ugh I messed up his vitals so bad though..
just because I wanted to make him a hero

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August 24, 2018 04:29 PM

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Heyo! I'm looking for some critique on this. It's a gift and I feel it's really off. Thanks!
https://s26.postimg.cc/wklv0qk7b/BCBE6_B40-6_C2_C-4710-840_E-525226233_B98.png?dl=1

August 24, 2018 04:40 PM

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It's so cute :0

August 24, 2018 04:47 PM

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Thanks!

August 24, 2018 04:47 PM

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Maybe put the frosting in front of the hedgehog, make it more centered-looking? It's a really great piece. Be proud!

August 24, 2018 04:49 PM

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TheAlphaPack said:
Maybe put the frosting in front of the hedgehog, make it more centered-looking? It's a really great piece. Be proud!

Ooh good idea, thanks!

August 24, 2018 04:49 PM

starwolfs

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It looks cute, my critique would be maybe make the cupcake cups bottom a little rounder ( more 3D ish ) and bring the topping to the foreground so its in front of it unless it supposed to be on the other side

Thats it I hoped I helped

August 24, 2018 04:51 PM

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starwolfs said:
It looks cute, my critique would be maybe make the cupcake cups bottom a little rounder ( more 3D ish ) and bring the topping to the foreground so it’s in front of it unless it supposed to be on the other side

That’s it I hoped I helped

You definitely did, thanks!

August 24, 2018 04:58 PM

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That's beautiful! And really cute :D

August 24, 2018 04:58 PM

Dash Attacked

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The frosting and the cherry seem to be layered pretty weirdly? Maybe try to make them look like they're each sitting on top of the other rather than behind it. ^^ I absolutely adore how you did the hedgehog though! :'D

August 24, 2018 05:01 PM