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Oof my head kinda hurts. >.>

But I still wanna do at least a doodle.
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Ezra,

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oh my gosh yeah! shes beautiful, definitly my favoite now!
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Ezra,

You can use them in this shop to buy things:
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hey what are lupine claws for
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Ollie,
teach me your ways lol
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Cervo,
I hope she gives you good pups!!
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Cervo,
Thats the one I gave you :O
 Moonfall
10:14:41 Many moons, one me
Looks amazing Eve!!
Demons
It looks so fluffy!
 Oleander Kiss
10:12:24 Cervo
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I just know shes gonna make me wait but im so excited for her pups
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cool
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Thoughts? :)
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10:08:59 Never/Nev
Those look great Eve!
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thanks!
 The Bird Woods Pack
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ooo
 SixBears
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There will be a bunch in the Event shop. :)
 The Bird Woods Pack
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Is there only one so far?

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 Zeraphia
10:58:14 Captain / Vah
Oof my head kinda hurts. >.>

But I still wanna do at least a doodle.
 Dagger Pack
10:49:28 Zuko/Legacy
Ezra,

No problem!
 Ezranian
10:48:58 ezra, he/him
zuko-
cool thanks!
 Oleander Kiss
10:48:23 Cervo
wild
oh my gosh yeah! shes beautiful, definitly my favoite now!
 Dagger Pack
10:47:17 Zuko/Legacy
Ezra,

You can use them in this shop to buy things:
-WP Click-
 Ezranian
10:46:30 ezra, he/him
hey what are lupine claws for
 Nekros
10:37:33 Kros
RP anybody? PM me!
 Wild Runners
10:30:13 Stalking chat
Ollie,
teach me your ways lol
 Wild Runners
10:29:51 Stalking chat
Cervo,
I hope she gives you good pups!!
 Serpents
10:29:17 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
anyone up for a rp or chat pm me please
 Wild Runners
10:27:10 Stalking chat
Cervo,
Thats the one I gave you :O
 Moonfall
10:14:41 Many moons, one me
Looks amazing Eve!!
Demons
It looks so fluffy!
 Oleander Kiss
10:12:24 Cervo
-WP Click-
I just know shes gonna make me wait but im so excited for her pups
 Twinkling Star
10:11:46 
cool
 Faulty Demons
10:10:25 Ollie, Gold
Thoughts? :)
-Click-
 Nevermore
10:08:59 Never/Nev
Those look great Eve!
 The Bird Woods Pack
10:07:20 Shore/ShoreBird
thanks!
 The Bird Woods Pack
10:06:49 Shore/ShoreBird
ooo
 SixBears
10:06:22 evebot
There will be a bunch in the Event shop. :)
 The Bird Woods Pack
10:06:01 Shore/ShoreBird
Is there only one so far?




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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