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 Lucky Rat
05:59:39 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
EoE
Yes I’m a natural blonde and yeah I think that’s what it’s called?
 Moonfall
05:58:50 Many moons, one me
Petri,
fair. I got bit by a dog on vacation once, and it looked terrible for about 3 months till it finally healed. Now I have a scar on my nose that somehow matches a scar on one of my cats nose
 TheFlyingKitten
05:58:15 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Bah; Should I fall asleep and risk messing up my sleep schedule for tonight (keep in mind I have a doctor's appointment tomorrow morning), or try to find some way to keep myself awake until later?
 Wild Runners
05:55:30 Stalking chat
-WP Click-

heya chat,
just a question,
should I make him a custom when I have enough apples or no?
 Eye of Eternity
05:54:45 tern | they/he
scorpion
no problem ^^
 SouthernScorpion
05:54:19 Scorpion
Thank you!!! i was in the wrong spot!
 Eye of Eternity
05:53:36 tern | they/he
scorpion
ohhh okay so you wanna go to barter > apples > breeding items and then there should be a little checkbox under the buy that says use gift apple
 TheFlyingKitten
05:53:35 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Moonfall
Lol, true. I'd rather it scar over than look like it does now. Darn scabs.
 Eye of Eternity
05:52:55 tern | they/he
rat lord
if youre already blonde maybe do temporary/chalk dye (if thats what its called)?
if youre not i dont think thats worth bleaching your hair for, so maybe add coloured ribbons or something?
 SouthernScorpion
05:52:49 Scorpion
that is the relic i have
 SouthernScorpion
05:52:41 Scorpion
Someone wanted to give you a breeding gift. Use this item to purchase a breeding item worth two apples in Barter.
 Moonfall
05:52:31 Many moons, one me
Petri
That's sucky. But if it's bound to scar then it should be easier to cosplay scared characters 🤷
Besides scars are cool, and you can always say you fought a giant?
 Eye of Eternity
05:51:41 tern | they/he
scorpion
what relic is it and who re you trying it use it on?
 Lucky Rat
05:50:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
*dye
 TheFlyingKitten
05:50:02 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Moonfall
I can, but I have to wait for the road rash on my face to heal. Five stitches atop two huge wounds bound to scar. Blegh.
 Lucky Rat
05:49:36 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Evergreen/EoE
Alrighty now should I day die the ends of my hair or just leave it?
 SouthernScorpion
05:49:13 Scorpion
I have it but it's not allowing me
 Moonfall
05:48:17 Many moons, one me
Petri
Hope you can get it fixed! That sounds like no fun :(
 Wild Runners
05:48:08 Stalking chat
Scorpion,
it should say 'use apple gift' in a small box under it
 TheFlyingKitten
05:48:01 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
-YT Click-

Heh, bread.

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 Lucky Rat
05:59:39 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
EoE
Yes I’m a natural blonde and yeah I think that’s what it’s called?
 Moonfall
05:58:50 Many moons, one me
Petri,
fair. I got bit by a dog on vacation once, and it looked terrible for about 3 months till it finally healed. Now I have a scar on my nose that somehow matches a scar on one of my cats nose
 TheFlyingKitten
05:58:15 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Bah; Should I fall asleep and risk messing up my sleep schedule for tonight (keep in mind I have a doctor's appointment tomorrow morning), or try to find some way to keep myself awake until later?
 Wild Runners
05:55:30 Stalking chat
-WP Click-

heya chat,
just a question,
should I make him a custom when I have enough apples or no?
 Eye of Eternity
05:54:45 tern | they/he
scorpion
no problem ^^
 SouthernScorpion
05:54:19 Scorpion
Thank you!!! i was in the wrong spot!
 Eye of Eternity
05:53:36 tern | they/he
scorpion
ohhh okay so you wanna go to barter > apples > breeding items and then there should be a little checkbox under the buy that says use gift apple
 TheFlyingKitten
05:53:35 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Moonfall
Lol, true. I'd rather it scar over than look like it does now. Darn scabs.
 Eye of Eternity
05:52:55 tern | they/he
rat lord
if youre already blonde maybe do temporary/chalk dye (if thats what its called)?
if youre not i dont think thats worth bleaching your hair for, so maybe add coloured ribbons or something?
 SouthernScorpion
05:52:49 Scorpion
that is the relic i have
 SouthernScorpion
05:52:41 Scorpion
Someone wanted to give you a breeding gift. Use this item to purchase a breeding item worth two apples in Barter.
 Moonfall
05:52:31 Many moons, one me
Petri
That's sucky. But if it's bound to scar then it should be easier to cosplay scared characters 🤷
Besides scars are cool, and you can always say you fought a giant?
 Eye of Eternity
05:51:41 tern | they/he
scorpion
what relic is it and who re you trying it use it on?
 Lucky Rat
05:50:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
*dye
 TheFlyingKitten
05:50:02 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Moonfall
I can, but I have to wait for the road rash on my face to heal. Five stitches atop two huge wounds bound to scar. Blegh.
 Lucky Rat
05:49:36 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Evergreen/EoE
Alrighty now should I day die the ends of my hair or just leave it?
 SouthernScorpion
05:49:13 Scorpion
I have it but it's not allowing me
 Moonfall
05:48:17 Many moons, one me
Petri
Hope you can get it fixed! That sounds like no fun :(
 Wild Runners
05:48:08 Stalking chat
Scorpion,
it should say 'use apple gift' in a small box under it
 TheFlyingKitten
05:48:01 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
-YT Click-

Heh, bread.




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Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 12:41 PM


Kortez

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you



Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:48 PM


Former Pack

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ok so the last attempt looks great!
the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?
the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:51 PM


Nezachii

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:52 PM


Kortez

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Please do

Nez.ity said:
If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.


Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:53 PM


Nezachii

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio

Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:57 PM


Kortez

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I heavily appreciate your words and your redline! Thank you very much!
That's the thing..i don't want my art to be cartoony.. I'm aiming for a semi realistic style, but I'm clearly far from that

Edited at February 24, 2022 10:53 PM by Excisus

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