Wolf Play : Critique

11:03:42 ezra, he/him

depends on the relic. ones that are used directly on wolves can be applied through the "use item" menu in quick view

11:02:08 Scorpion

does anyone know how to use relics

10:58:16 Many moons, one me

Scorpion
That's fair, they are kinda heavy. I'm looking forward to seeing how everything resolves

10:53:13 ezra, he/him

tallula-
you can buy stuff with them here -WP Click-

it's in the marketplace list

10:51:49 Scorpion

I love the core 3, after that they're a bit hard for me to read but I'm trying

10:50:39 Many moons, one me

Scorpion
I love that series!! I'm only on book 4 since I'm waiting on 5 and 6 from the library

Tallula

10:50:36

What do you do with lupine claws

10:47:33 Many moons, one me

Rogue Element accidentally steps on Rocky Rogue while they are sleeping.

I find it a little bit funny that you stepped on your kid, but at the same time at least you have the decency to feel sheepish

10:42:27 P'Sky/Sky-kun

XD xD
Walked into that one didn't I

10:42:17 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

ezra

I have my own unhinged tags, but compared to others I've seen, mine are pretty tame.

10:42:04 Scorpion

my new wolves
-WP Click-
-WP Click-

10:40:16 ezra, he/him

petri-
same they're great :)

10:38:47 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Ah, I love unhinged Ao3 tags. UwU

10:38:40 P'Sky/Sky-kun

It's on in the lip/teeth/tongue movement

GreatestAxolotl

10:37:21

I use my teeth to whistle

Vax

10:33:34 a rock in your shoe

petri
oh
i can’t whistle ever

10:33:04 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Vax

No, I used to be able to! I now cannot!

Vax

10:32:13 a rock in your shoe

petri
me neither

10:32:07 Scorpion

how do i use my relic to stagger dom?

10:29:16 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Chat, it's an emergency! I can't whistle! D:

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11:03:42 ezra, he/him

depends on the relic. ones that are used directly on wolves can be applied through the "use item" menu in quick view

11:02:08 Scorpion

does anyone know how to use relics

10:58:16 Many moons, one me

Scorpion
That's fair, they are kinda heavy. I'm looking forward to seeing how everything resolves

10:53:13 ezra, he/him

tallula-
you can buy stuff with them here -WP Click-

it's in the marketplace list

10:51:49 Scorpion

I love the core 3, after that they're a bit hard for me to read but I'm trying

10:50:39 Many moons, one me

Scorpion
I love that series!! I'm only on book 4 since I'm waiting on 5 and 6 from the library

Tallula

10:50:36

What do you do with lupine claws

10:47:33 Many moons, one me

10:42:27 P'Sky/Sky-kun

XD xD
Walked into that one didn't I

10:42:17 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

ezra

I have my own unhinged tags, but compared to others I've seen, mine are pretty tame.

10:42:04 Scorpion

my new wolves
-WP Click-
-WP Click-

10:40:16 ezra, he/him

petri-
same they're great :)

10:38:47 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Ah, I love unhinged Ao3 tags. UwU

10:38:40 P'Sky/Sky-kun

It's on in the lip/teeth/tongue movement

GreatestAxolotl

10:37:21

I use my teeth to whistle

Vax

10:33:34 a rock in your shoe

petri
oh
i can’t whistle ever

10:33:04 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Vax

No, I used to be able to! I now cannot!

Vax

10:32:13 a rock in your shoe

petri
me neither

10:32:07 Scorpion

how do i use my relic to stagger dom?

10:29:16 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Chat, it's an emergency! I can't whistle! D:

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM