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Do tree's have genders?
 TheFlyingKitten
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I've always wanted a bonsai tree, but I already have an elderly cat and a teenage dog. Bonsais are so particular and I probably wouldn't be able to give him/her the proper attention and pruning needed.
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I got a sling to help with my shoulder
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Sourdough is so silly. Just a living clump that eats flour and explodes or dies depending on how often you feed it. <3
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i made 5 starters with 3 different types of flour and two different methods

lol im making it an experiment so if i fail im less bummed but im also giving myself as many chances as i can
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I have so many eggs hehe
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really cool stuff
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oooh sourdough starter
 Greed
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thats really cool!

yea sourdough just requires a sourdough starter (which is water and flour) and once its started you just make bread its super easy but making a starter can be tricky. im hoping i get it my first time around

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 Night Raven College
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Do tree's have genders?
 TheFlyingKitten
03:32:51 Petri Dish/Dert
I've always wanted a bonsai tree, but I already have an elderly cat and a teenage dog. Bonsais are so particular and I probably wouldn't be able to give him/her the proper attention and pruning needed.
 Night Raven College
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Sleep
What happened to your shoulder?
 Ezranian
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yeah lightbringers are losing despite my best efforts lol
 Pink kitty🐈
03:30:38 Kneecap stealer
I got a sling to help with my shoulder
 Night Raven College
03:26:03 NRC/Night/Raven
Greed
Like a crystal
 Greed
03:25:42 
its a little creature im growing
 Night Raven College
03:25:25 NRC/Night/Raven
Neutrals are still winning for egg collecting.
 Night Raven College
03:24:40 NRC/Night/Raven
Vax
Lol I know
 TheFlyingKitten
03:24:38 Petri Dish/Dert
Sourdough is so silly. Just a living clump that eats flour and explodes or dies depending on how often you feed it. <3
 Night Raven College
03:24:22 NRC/Night/Raven
I have 35 and an overall of 141
 Vax
03:24:14 a rock in your shoe
nrc
it would be weird if you were talking about anything else
 Greed
03:24:10 
i made 5 starters with 3 different types of flour and two different methods

lol im making it an experiment so if i fail im less bummed but im also giving myself as many chances as i can
 Vax
03:23:51 a rock in your shoe
nrc
I have exactly 0
 Night Raven College
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For the event
 Night Raven College
03:23:35 NRC/Night/Raven
I have so many eggs hehe
 Night Raven College
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Wishing you luck(:
 Vax
03:22:33 a rock in your shoe
really cool stuff
 Vax
03:22:25 a rock in your shoe
greed
oooh sourdough starter
 Greed
03:21:48 
thats really cool!

yea sourdough just requires a sourdough starter (which is water and flour) and once its started you just make bread its super easy but making a starter can be tricky. im hoping i get it my first time around




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Critique?July 30, 2018 05:59 AM


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I was just messing around and I made this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png
And this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png
If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background
I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:36 PM


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Horse
I can't see it
But the D ring for your bit is way too big
And the rest of the bridle is way to small
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:46 PM


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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.
https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or
https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png
(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:
Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:
https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.
There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°
Critique?July 30, 2018 03:58 PM


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Thanks Astro and Midnight!
The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black
I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.
I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD
Critique?July 30, 2018 06:33 PM


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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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