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I want people to enjoy these story's so I'm always open to criticism. On here I'll post different kind of story's short story's, long story's, fantasy etc. Below I will have a list of the story's and the information about it. -
I may change that though. I hope everyone likes them and I'm open to criticism just think before you post though please. I'm always open for helpful criticism and sometimes ideas. I am also going to be putting this on my blog so go there if you want to read it without turning pages. My Blog |
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Imformation Story's The Escape Of The Century | Chapters: 1 | Chapter One - |
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What about like a short or long story about how a fox/wolf gets stolen from its den as a kit/pup and raised/treated as a pet |
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I like it
*.+Mirage+.* said:
What about like a short or long story about how a fox/wolf gets stolen from its den as a kit/pup and raised/treated as a pet
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Lunas Life Part 1 Luna woke up again next to her mother and her four other siblings, she opened her eyes, the sun glaring into them. She felt her mothers throat growl and then heard it seconds later, Luna couldn't see or hear very far as she was still young. She saw a figure coming close to her, it was blurry but the next second she had something round her eyes, she couldn't see!
- She called for her mother, well rather squealed as she was to young she couldn't hear anything. She closed her eyes and waited. She heard banging, she felt being picked up and the cloth got whipped of her face. It was to bright! Everything was so white, there was a human glaring over her with a light in her eyes muttering. "She's young, about 4weeks." |
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Maybe you could make a short/long story of how a fox got exposed to radiation and got supernatural powers? |
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Luna's Life Part 2 Luna tried to call for her mother again but no answer. "She's a feisty one" The Human poked and prodded her, " Where did you say you found her?" The human with the bright flashy light said to another in the corner. "She was with her mother and four other siblings, but they died of hyperthermia." No they were lying! Her family was...safe...and sound...She blacked out. - Luna woke up in a cage, what had happened to her? She spent a few days in that cage being fed but there were no signs of her family, their scent had gone cold. One day a woman took her out of the cage, she had a lovely face and talked to her very calmly. "I'll take her, I've got one wolf dog and two German shepherds she'll fit in quite nicely." Luna got loaded into a box on wheels and was transported to a brick and wooden box. - The woman took Luna, still in the cage and brought her inside of the box. It was actually quite nice, it was warm and quiet until three dogs bounded up to the woman. The woman put the cage on the ground, these massive dogs sniffed her cage. Luna was nervous what would they do to her? |
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Edited at May 9, 2024 07:32 AM by Thundering Embers
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The Escape Of The Century Teasers The blurb Let Me know if I should post all of the chapters, I am writing as I go though. At this time chapter one is finished and I'm starting on chapter two. Blurb When Jack Aiden Willows got caught up in the wrong crowd he joined a gang and after a couple months he found himself locked up for life for a number of crimes. He recently turned 18 and had to transfer to a different prison for the worst prisoners in the whole world, they never come out. When he gets imformation about a potential prison break he decides to see if he could be apart knowing that it hasn't happened in years maybe even a century, follow Jack Willows or as one of his many names to see if he gets out alive or not. |
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The Escape Of The Century CLANK, the sound of the metal bars of the jail cell I was in, it was lonely in here I didn't have any family to talk to and all my friends ditched me when the cops showed up all too scared to show their faces in case anyone recognised them. I was counting down the days until my next parole hearing, I had already been in this excuse of a prison, but I guess that was the message. I had been sentenced for life for burglary, armed robbery and assault but I didn't mean to do any. Yes, I had done it, but it wasn't my fault I was scared I was only 15. I am now 17 two years is a lot of time for a minor I tried to tell them, but my case wasn't good enough. I had been caught up in the wrong people since my parents had died, a suicide they said but my parents were so kind and happy I know something else happened but I'm too scared to tell anyone. I was getting used to life in prison I would die in here, so I had to make allies not friends allies, no one is your friend in here that was my first mistake in here when I arrived. My parole hearing was in a couple of days after my birthday, I was going to be eighteen an adult so if I couldn’t get out, I was going to have to go to an adult prison. “WILLOWS!” Ah the usual shouting and banging from the guards, “I’m awake!” I stood up with my hands on my head, the guard opened the rusty jail cell door, and I walked out. “Move it!” The guard kicked me behind the knee causing it to buckle and resulting in me falling. The cell next door had a boy called Alex Jacobs; he wasn’t there today though I wondered where because he usually mocked me every time I went past. “Up move it!” I winced in pain but stood up quickly and carried on walking with a slight limp if I didn’t, they’d drag me, and I wasn’t in the mood for that. I walked into the canteen and put my hands down, I walked around the edge of the room avoiding the bins in the way to the trays. “What is it today, Cruiser?” I asked the boy behind the counter that wasn’t his actual name everyone had a nickname if you were well known or had been in here a while, “Tha usual, always tha usual.” I walked over to my usual table the second at the back on the left, Cooper walked over to me at my table, “Hey ma’e can I sit?” “Sure mate” he sat down opposite me and offered me some of his bread I took it and offered him some mash, food was currency in here and he respected me, so I respected him. Bennett and Spider came over, Spider chucked a carrot at me “Where’d you get this from your mother?!” We all laughed joking around, “Thanks mate” we joked around all the time it was how we were still alive. I finally broke the silence, “Do any of you lads know where Jacobs is?” They thought for a minute before Spider answered, “He wasn’t in his cell?” “No, I walked past him and got kicked but he didn’t mock me like he usually does he wasn’t there” they all looked a bit shocked “There’s Skull ask him” Cooper said while gesturing over to him at a table on the other side, “Come on lads” I said and we got up and walked over to him at his table, “Do yous know where Jacobs is?” I asked Skull and his group “We were just wondering the same” they looked at us wide eyed and confused, “Ok mates not to worry, he wasn’t in his cell” we walked away, and I gave Spider my tray, “See you boys later” I walked off to the library for my work assignment. |
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