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Read my mind. I'm finally feeling tired. Night y'all. Be expecting a funny Etana (finally) in the morning. |
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Oh my fucking god she's gorgeous. That photo is so cute!!
Ravensrun said:
Also the stock for mavka is fucking adorable
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Welp. Talon will be posted sometime tomorrow, I have art class from 1:00 to 3:30 (PM, Pacific Time) so I'll be off for a while, considering I leave a bit early, usually. And that doesn't include errands, so I may be gone for a bit. |
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Sweet as, I might head off to bed since it's almost 10pm. Not that I did much today but oh well
the Wayne pack said:
Welp. Talon will be posted sometime tomorrow, I have art class from 1:00 to 3:30 (PM, Pacific Time) so I'll be off for a while, considering I leave a bit early, usually. And that doesn't include errands, so I may be gone for a bit.
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Night everyone almost 4 am |
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I'm so not used to more literate roleplays lol. I'm hoping this one will help me get used to them however. I've always wanted to be a more detailed writer. By the way, any tips for making longer posts? |
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Finn is just adorable 🤧 I love him |
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Crazydayz said:
I'm so not used to more literate roleplays lol. I'm hoping this one will help me get used to them however. I've always wanted to be a more detailed writer. By the way, any tips for making longer posts?
So, I dunno if this is gonna help! But I'll try! Inner dialogue is big. Describe your characters thoughts, actions, and reactions. When I am making 5 paragraph posts in a back and forth with someone, the first 2-3 paragraphs are my character responding to theirs. So if Finn and Aloe were interacting, my first 2-3 paragraphs would be him thinking about and processing what shes saying/doing. Then, my next 2-3 paragraphs would be Finn responding. My rule of thumb is at LEAST 2 paragraphs of new content. Introduce something new to the discussion. You can respond to the others characters dialogue, but make sure your character is adding something new to the conversation through their actions/dialogue. If you don't, shit gets boring REAL fast. Akuma and Finn's posts kind of highlight my format. Once you can write like, 500 word posts, you're solid from there. |
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Thanks! That helps me a lot. I'll keep this in mind moving forwards!
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Crazydayz said:
I'm so not used to more literate roleplays lol. I'm hoping this one will help me get used to them however. I've always wanted to be a more detailed writer. By the way, any tips for making longer posts?
So, I dunno if this is gonna help! But I'll try! Inner dialogue is big. Describe your characters thoughts, actions, and reactions. When I am making 5 paragraph posts in a back and forth with someone, the first 2-3 paragraphs are my character responding to theirs. So if Finn and Aloe were interacting, my first 2-3 paragraphs would be him thinking about and processing what shes saying/doing. Then, my next 2-3 paragraphs would be Finn responding. My rule of thumb is at LEAST 2 paragraphs of new content. Introduce something new to the discussion. You can respond to the others characters dialogue, but make sure your character is adding something new to the conversation through their actions/dialogue. If you don't, shit gets boring REAL fast. Akuma and Finn's posts kind of highlight my format. Once you can write like, 500 word posts, you're solid from there.
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