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Heres my gallery, near the back can you tell me what to work on also I need help on draw paws of wolves.
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I was wondering if you could give any advice on this piece. I was working mainly on shading and color and i am looking for any tips on how to improve. I am also terrible at wings. https://i.postimg.cc/nLfRDjrz/sketch-1541127171488.png |
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I need help with some shading. I haven't shaded this piece because I don't know where to shade.
https://i.postimg.cc/L4BvMCgv/11.png |
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Sorry I let thus go for so long. I'm gonna try to get everyone's replace done asap! |
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New ~ Horizons said:
https://s15.postimg.cc/segla6g3t/1533796423877.pngI'd love some critique on this piece! Mainly on anatomy and shading. The lines were supposed to be messy.
It's a beautiful piece!
The two main anatomy problems I see here are the in the head and the haunch.
The head seems a little too small for the body here, and the eye placement is a little high and far back. A wolf's eye is more towards the front if the face, and the center is level with the top of the snout.
Also, the back leg doesn't seem to bend right. The haunch, or right behind the bend of the knee seems to go straight down to the hock, or ankle joint. Instead, it should tuck under, similar to how a human leg does.
Now the shading isn't half bad! It looks great! I also suggest shading between the body and the left legs.
If I need to explain better, or if my words confuse you, please let me know! |
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Moonshire Pack said:
Thank you ;D And sory to be a pain on the ass but I spent all day studying anatomy etc https://s8.postimg.cc/3nv09xqxh/Untitled102.jpg Just wondering what your opinions are on this and what would ne the best way to colour Lineless or lined etc and do you have any tips for boh options?
This looks excellent! You are defenently improving!
The only things I would have to say about it would be that the head seems slightly large. Also, with the way the snout seems to be angled, it doesn't seem you have the forehead angles to correspond with it. You should move the edge of the forehead over towards the right of its face and add the ridge for the right eye.
Also, the rump and back leg seem a little small. I think if you bring up the rump so that it covers the top of the tail, it should be good. ^^
If say for how complex the drawing is, I'd keep it lined. Just make sure to keep the color in the lines, and use a small brush for the fur to make sure it's colored neatly.
However, if you did do lineless, it takes a lot more effort to keep edges smooth, and use a lot of shading of different luminance. |
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thanks dragon ^^
Dragon's Fire said:
Moonshire Pack said:
Thank you ;D And sory to be a pain on the ass but I spent all day studying anatomy etc https://s8.postimg.cc/3nv09xqxh/Untitled102.jpg Just wondering what your opinions are on this and what would ne the best way to colour Lineless or lined etc and do you have any tips for boh options?
This looks excellent! You are defenently improving!
The only things I would have to say about it would be that the head seems slightly large. Also, with the way the snout seems to be angled, it doesn't seem you have the forehead angles to correspond with it. You should move the edge of the forehead over towards the right of its face and add the ridge for the right eye.
Also, the rump and back leg seem a little small. I think if you bring up the rump so that it covers the top of the tail, it should be good. ^^
If say for how complex the drawing is, I'd keep it lined. Just make sure to keep the color in the lines, and use a small brush for the fur to make sure it's colored neatly.
However, if you did do lineless, it takes a lot more effort to keep edges smooth, and use a lot of shading of different luminance.
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If this is still open, I need suu much help with antonomy. Halp me ;u; |
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