Wolf Play : Constructive Criticism

09:17:18 Is a dinosaur rawr

Cyber thats so pretty :00

Buttercup

09:16:54

Hi Chat!

Quasar Hoarder

09:14:34 Quasar, QH

I love it!

09:14:20 Graves | Chaos

Cyber that's incredible

09:12:11 Cyber / Onion

-Click-

Hmm, playing around with wing recolours.

Time to go wake birdies up, later ya'll!

09:06:52 Graves | Chaos

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I don't know if you know the coffee joint Dutch Brothers, but they do a lot of different drinks. I usually get a chai from them. I was born and raised in their founding town, but I moved to California a few years ago. Luckily they have a few stations in my area, I just have to drive 20 minutes to get there. Which is fine because I'm usually there for groceries or something

Mythology

09:06:10

Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 0
Mushrooms: 3,601
Mushrooms Saved: 1,963

getting closer to 10k mush

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09:04:41

Graves
Lol coffee sounds so good right now

09:03:21 Graves | Chaos

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Treating myself always makes me feel better. XD It's just usually in the form of coffee haha

09:02:50 Graves | Chaos

Cyber
As far as I know it's mostly just to show someone likes a particular wolf or pack. There might be a leaderboard but I'm not sure, I don't use the leaderboards or paws

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09:02:46

Graves
If you think treating yourself would help settle your nerves maybe

09:02:11 Cyber / Onion

Malpha

So pretty! I can see why you're keeping them

09:01:45 Cyber / Onion

What do paws do?

09:01:25 Graves | Chaos

I'm debating going out to breakfast or not :/

Malpha

09:00:33 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

-WP Click-
Paws? She's the first wolf I'm keeping.

09:00:30 katy | beetle

changing passwords is the first thing i did when i saw the transaction in my secretary bird :') i'm just hoping it was a glitch and not a hacking situation.

08:59:32 Lurantis

I don't understand why someone would do that? Cause they're spending their money on your account. I hope you changed passwords!

08:59:18 katy | beetle

Buggy,
definitely not sadly </3 i was awake when it happened, just not on wolfplay.

Violet,
haha thanks for clarifying xD that's one less suspect

and same! it's very odd

08:58:39 Lurantis

Katy
I'm really hoping it was just tired you...

08:58:37 Is a dinosaur rawr

distant
if it helps it wasn't me XD
I hope you are able to figure out how that happened though

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09:17:18 Is a dinosaur rawr

Cyber thats so pretty :00

Buttercup

09:16:54

Hi Chat!

Quasar Hoarder

09:14:34 Quasar, QH

I love it!

09:14:20 Graves | Chaos

Cyber that's incredible

09:12:11 Cyber / Onion

-Click-

Hmm, playing around with wing recolours.

Time to go wake birdies up, later ya'll!

09:06:52 Graves | Chaos

Mythology

09:06:10

Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 0
Mushrooms: 3,601
Mushrooms Saved: 1,963

getting closer to 10k mush

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09:04:41

Graves
Lol coffee sounds so good right now

09:03:21 Graves | Chaos

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Treating myself always makes me feel better. XD It's just usually in the form of coffee haha

09:02:50 Graves | Chaos

Cyber
As far as I know it's mostly just to show someone likes a particular wolf or pack. There might be a leaderboard but I'm not sure, I don't use the leaderboards or paws

Chat

09:02:46

Graves
If you think treating yourself would help settle your nerves maybe

09:02:11 Cyber / Onion

Malpha

So pretty! I can see why you're keeping them

09:01:45 Cyber / Onion

What do paws do?

09:01:25 Graves | Chaos

I'm debating going out to breakfast or not :/

Malpha

09:00:33 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

-WP Click-
Paws? She's the first wolf I'm keeping.

09:00:30 katy | beetle

changing passwords is the first thing i did when i saw the transaction in my secretary bird :') i'm just hoping it was a glitch and not a hacking situation.

08:59:32 Lurantis

I don't understand why someone would do that? Cause they're spending their money on your account. I hope you changed passwords!

08:59:18 katy | beetle

Buggy,
definitely not sadly </3 i was awake when it happened, just not on wolfplay.

Violet,
haha thanks for clarifying xD that's one less suspect

and same! it's very odd

08:58:39 Lurantis

Katy
I'm really hoping it was just tired you...

08:58:37 Is a dinosaur rawr

distant
if it helps it wasn't me XD
I hope you are able to figure out how that happened though

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February 24, 2022 12:41 PM

TKO

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you

Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus

February 24, 2022 02:48 PM

Lucifer

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ok so the last attempt looks great!

the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?

the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves

February 24, 2022 02:51 PM

Nez.ity

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 02:52 PM

TKO

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Please do

Nez.ity said:

If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 04:53 PM

Nez.ity

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio