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 Texy
05:28:35 Texy (he,Him)
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name ideas?
 Malpha
05:23:03 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Texy,
Thanks! And yeah I'd retire the starters since I don't think anyone would really want to buy them.
 Texy
05:20:21 Texy (he,Him)
should I retire my starter wolves?
 Texy
05:19:54 Texy (he,Him)
malpha
HW is 130 and up
 Malpha
05:17:27 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Hey what counts as heavy weight?
 Malpha
05:16:08 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Texy,
Maybe auction em off for cheap or retire for bones.
 Mirko
05:15:52 Mir
Texy
Sell them or soup them
 Texy
05:12:30 Texy (he,Him)
if I'm restarting my pack what's the best thing to do with the wolves I currently have?
 Malpha
05:12:21 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Myth,
Hm that's probably a good idea. Though I'm not usually in the wolf breeding business. I'll probably try it.

Nobachey,
Is Poor George a good wolf or something? Lol
 Nobachey
05:07:00 Call me anything
Mal
His dads name is, "Poor George." I'd keep him.
 Mythology
05:06:41 
Malpha

I say keep him and breed him and see what he produces pup wise
 Malpha
05:05:49 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Got this guy for just 10 mush. Such a steal.
-WP Click-
Should I keep or sell?
 Nobachey
05:04:33 Call me anything
Dark
Lol I thought your wolf was wearing a plain blue sweater for a sec
 Mythology
05:03:09 
oops I killed chat again
 Mythology
04:51:30 
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my goal is 10k mush
 Nobachey
04:47:29 Call me anything
Ooh noooo
 StarClan
04:46:42 Star, not leaving
me, doing it right now
 Malpha
04:45:30 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Is there anyone knowledgeable about the wolf market that could PM me?
 Malpha
04:44:11 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Myth,
I feel that lol
 Mythology
04:43:47 
I just got flash banged by my own palette

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 Texy
05:28:35 Texy (he,Him)
-WP Click-

name ideas?
 Malpha
05:23:03 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Texy,
Thanks! And yeah I'd retire the starters since I don't think anyone would really want to buy them.
 Texy
05:20:21 Texy (he,Him)
should I retire my starter wolves?
 Texy
05:19:54 Texy (he,Him)
malpha
HW is 130 and up
 Malpha
05:17:27 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Hey what counts as heavy weight?
 Malpha
05:16:08 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Texy,
Maybe auction em off for cheap or retire for bones.
 Mirko
05:15:52 Mir
Texy
Sell them or soup them
 Texy
05:12:30 Texy (he,Him)
if I'm restarting my pack what's the best thing to do with the wolves I currently have?
 Malpha
05:12:21 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Myth,
Hm that's probably a good idea. Though I'm not usually in the wolf breeding business. I'll probably try it.

Nobachey,
Is Poor George a good wolf or something? Lol
 Nobachey
05:07:00 Call me anything
Mal
His dads name is, "Poor George." I'd keep him.
 Mythology
05:06:41 
Malpha

I say keep him and breed him and see what he produces pup wise
 Malpha
05:05:49 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Got this guy for just 10 mush. Such a steal.
-WP Click-
Should I keep or sell?
 Nobachey
05:04:33 Call me anything
Dark
Lol I thought your wolf was wearing a plain blue sweater for a sec
 Mythology
05:03:09 
oops I killed chat again
 Mythology
04:51:30 
Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 0
Mushrooms: 352
Mushrooms Saved: 1,963

my goal is 10k mush
 Nobachey
04:47:29 Call me anything
Ooh noooo
 StarClan
04:46:42 Star, not leaving
me, doing it right now
 Malpha
04:45:30 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Is there anyone knowledgeable about the wolf market that could PM me?
 Malpha
04:44:11 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Myth,
I feel that lol
 Mythology
04:43:47 
I just got flash banged by my own palette




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

https://s15.postimg.cc/4jkmy4zrf/draft.png
Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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