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11:38:32 ky / dh hoarder

Last week I was convinced he was gonna go and panic bred to one of my girls, just duds and he lived lol

11:37:36 Cae, Blue

but yeah, i feel you. been having at most 4 deaths for weeks now, its so not cool >:(

11:37:05 Cae, Blue

speak like that and kels will be the only one kicking the bucket ;-;

11:36:01 ky / dh hoarder

Cae, ooh I forgot about that lol. I want all of my oldies gone soon except Kels but they're refusing to die

11:33:59 Cae, Blue

i also did promise you id clear out my den this month... come see me about space on feb 1st lmao

11:33:27 Cae, Blue

ky, blame me being inactive and at work :') combined with forgetting pups are due...

i do still have 90ish litters to not lose, at least?

11:32:12 ky / dh hoarder

Christ Cae,, someone needs more den spaces, I bred all my girls at the same time last week and didn't lose any

11:32:08 cinna, wild, griffin

:)

11:31:53 Cae, Blue

mal, glad you like her ^^

11:31:38 Cae, Blue

-WP Click-
"the worst pup gets the blessing" curse struck again but shes pretty so its ok

11:31:20 Irish Gay Rat

Wild,
Hiya :3

11:30:48 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Cae,
Thanks so much you're the best <3

11:30:41 Irish Gay Rat

Grey Storm seems to want attention

-Click-

11:30:23 cinna, wild, griffin

Hey doodle dragon

11:30:12 You're just yellow

Punkin

Don't you hate when that happens >:/

11:29:25 Cae, Blue

ky <33

11:29:15 Cae, Blue

litters born to litters lost ratio is insane right now lmao

7:60

11:29:07 Mr Palette Guy

dulce,
Guess you're right, I'm a wild sloth. I need to work on a palette but I can't get a background pfft

11:28:31 Irish Gay Rat

Hey chat :3

11:28:14 You're just yellow

Punkin

Sloths are wild animals? (I think-)

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11:38:32 ky / dh hoarder

Last week I was convinced he was gonna go and panic bred to one of my girls, just duds and he lived lol

11:37:36 Cae, Blue

but yeah, i feel you. been having at most 4 deaths for weeks now, its so not cool >:(

11:37:05 Cae, Blue

speak like that and kels will be the only one kicking the bucket ;-;

11:36:01 ky / dh hoarder

Cae, ooh I forgot about that lol. I want all of my oldies gone soon except Kels but they're refusing to die

11:33:59 Cae, Blue

i also did promise you id clear out my den this month... come see me about space on feb 1st lmao

11:33:27 Cae, Blue

ky, blame me being inactive and at work :') combined with forgetting pups are due...

i do still have 90ish litters to not lose, at least?

11:32:12 ky / dh hoarder

Christ Cae,, someone needs more den spaces, I bred all my girls at the same time last week and didn't lose any

11:32:08 cinna, wild, griffin

:)

11:31:53 Cae, Blue

mal, glad you like her ^^

11:31:38 Cae, Blue

-WP Click-
"the worst pup gets the blessing" curse struck again but shes pretty so its ok

11:31:20 Irish Gay Rat

Wild,
Hiya :3

11:30:48 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Cae,
Thanks so much you're the best <3

11:30:41 Irish Gay Rat

Grey Storm seems to want attention

-Click-

11:30:23 cinna, wild, griffin

Hey doodle dragon

11:30:12 You're just yellow

Punkin

Don't you hate when that happens >:/

11:29:25 Cae, Blue

ky <33

11:29:15 Cae, Blue

litters born to litters lost ratio is insane right now lmao

7:60

11:29:07 Mr Palette Guy

dulce,
Guess you're right, I'm a wild sloth. I need to work on a palette but I can't get a background pfft

11:28:31 Irish Gay Rat

Hey chat :3

11:28:14 You're just yellow

Punkin

Sloths are wild animals? (I think-)

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Somethings amiss here

June 7, 2022 02:05 PM

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Idk if it's the colors or the lines or whatever but some thing is wrong here. Can y'all help me out?

She's based on a lionfish

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June 7, 2022 02:10 PM

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She sorta looks scary

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June 7, 2022 02:22 PM

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maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^;

though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D

looking good btw! i like the concept :>

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June 7, 2022 02:25 PM

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I was trying to go for a cute but creepy vibe, not sure how well that came across lol

awooo said:

She sorta looks scary

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June 7, 2022 02:25 PM

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Yeah, I tend to leave lining till last cause I hate doing it and while I was doing it I realized I didn't like something

swiftystarss said:

maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^;

though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D

looking good btw! i like the concept :>

Edited at June 7, 2022 02:26 PM by Flower Field

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June 7, 2022 03:48 PM

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Maybe it's that dip in the tail? Looks a bit too sharp. Could also be the facial features? Seems a bit off, compared ta the rest of the art.

Edited at June 7, 2022 03:55 PM by Cinnabar Banks Pack

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June 7, 2022 03:49 PM

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I find her eyes unsettling, haha they're just so different than the art style. The only way I could explain it is if you put googly eyes over a face.

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June 7, 2022 03:50 PM

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I think the proportion of the head is slightly off? Especially in comparison to the size of their arms...

Also it might be that there isn't much of a chin, which sort of breaks up a lot of the sharper lines that you have!

I really like the premise / concept, and it looks good, just not exactly proportional to the way a body looks! <3

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June 7, 2022 04:32 PM

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Alright! Took some things into consideration and here's V2

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June 7, 2022 04:38 PM

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I like this a lot more! Her arms don't look nearly as stretched out, which (in my opinion) makes the rest of her body look a lot more proportional and less wonky! Plus the lineart and fin detailing helped a lot.

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