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Spirit
Haha same, the first ones & last ones are from my early teenage years so classic 2000s/2010s hits
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reaper,
Hah how funny- first song I love. I used to sing it for hours like four years ago
 The Reaper
02:28:34 Reaper / Grim
Spirit
Try this, I threw a bit of my favorites in there while still trying to keep an upbeat, energetic tone (as well as a couple silly songs ;3)
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 Drunken seas
02:27:02 Pera
-WP Click- Looking for some help <3
 Caeruleum
02:23:56 Cae, Blue
amy, yeah.... got my hopes up and all </3
 Caeruleum
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how does this even get in sanctuary? werent there supposed to be rarity and talent restrictions?
 STS
02:22:20 TS, Speckles
Lucky i got my palette fixed, Makes life a lot easier
 Amygdala
02:21:20 Amy/Anpmygdala
Oh lol...i just saw the legendary nose lol
My bad
 MLadySkylar
02:21:01 P'Sky
Wow
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 Amygdala
02:20:53 Amy/Anpmygdala
Yay sorry i love you did good for once XD
 Zeraphia
02:20:40 Space Pirate Captain
Holly

It got a UI update! You have a mobile friendly version and an updated desktop version.
 *Hollystar*
02:20:10 Holly
What the heck happened to the site layout o.O
 Caeruleum
02:19:17 Cae, Blue
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 Zeraphia
02:19:06 Space Pirate Captain
My first thoughts are Riot and Alive by the Scarlet Opera...

I love Be Mine by the covasettes

Old one but solid is Could have been me by the struts

Oooh drama by Spencer Sutherland too--
 ~♥Nux♥~
02:18:39 You're just yellow
Punkin

Okayyy,

Dreams ~ Fleetwood Mac

Basket Case ~ Green Day

Heart-Shaped Box ~ Nirvana

Anything by the Arctic Monkeys is decent, honestly
 SpiritGuardian
02:16:12 Mr Palette Guy
dulce, ehh yeah.
 ~♥Nux♥~
02:15:42 You're just yellow
Punkin

You're looking for songs you haven't heard?
 SpiritGuardian
02:15:07 Mr Palette Guy
dulce,
I have actually already heard it haha
 ~♥Nux♥~
02:14:34 You're just yellow
Chop Suey ~ System of a Down
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Cae
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 The Reaper
02:32:18 Reaper / Grim
Spirit
Haha same, the first ones & last ones are from my early teenage years so classic 2000s/2010s hits
 SpiritGuardian
02:31:10 Mr Palette Guy
reaper,
Hah how funny- first song I love. I used to sing it for hours like four years ago
 The Reaper
02:28:34 Reaper / Grim
Spirit
Try this, I threw a bit of my favorites in there while still trying to keep an upbeat, energetic tone (as well as a couple silly songs ;3)
-YT Click-
 Drunken seas
02:27:02 Pera
-WP Click- Looking for some help <3
 Caeruleum
02:23:56 Cae, Blue
amy, yeah.... got my hopes up and all </3
 Caeruleum
02:23:37 Cae, Blue
-WP Click-
how does this even get in sanctuary? werent there supposed to be rarity and talent restrictions?
 STS
02:22:20 TS, Speckles
Lucky i got my palette fixed, Makes life a lot easier
 Amygdala
02:21:20 Amy/Anpmygdala
Oh lol...i just saw the legendary nose lol
My bad
 MLadySkylar
02:21:01 P'Sky
Wow
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 Amygdala
02:20:53 Amy/Anpmygdala
Yay sorry i love you did good for once XD
 Zeraphia
02:20:40 Space Pirate Captain
Holly

It got a UI update! You have a mobile friendly version and an updated desktop version.
 *Hollystar*
02:20:10 Holly
What the heck happened to the site layout o.O
 Caeruleum
02:19:17 Cae, Blue
-WP Click-
-Click-
 Zeraphia
02:19:06 Space Pirate Captain
My first thoughts are Riot and Alive by the Scarlet Opera...

I love Be Mine by the covasettes

Old one but solid is Could have been me by the struts

Oooh drama by Spencer Sutherland too--
 ~♥Nux♥~
02:18:39 You're just yellow
Punkin

Okayyy,

Dreams ~ Fleetwood Mac

Basket Case ~ Green Day

Heart-Shaped Box ~ Nirvana

Anything by the Arctic Monkeys is decent, honestly
 SpiritGuardian
02:16:12 Mr Palette Guy
dulce, ehh yeah.
 ~♥Nux♥~
02:15:42 You're just yellow
Punkin

You're looking for songs you haven't heard?
 SpiritGuardian
02:15:07 Mr Palette Guy
dulce,
I have actually already heard it haha
 ~♥Nux♥~
02:14:34 You're just yellow
Chop Suey ~ System of a Down
 Amygdala
02:13:46 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cae
I shall prepeare a guilliotine




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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

IMG-1638.jpg

First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


jaune

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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


Former Pack

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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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