Wolf Play : Critique

11:27:31 Many moons, one me

Alrighty then, done a bit of research, not seeing anything bad, it's one of the few allowed to be used by wp which means rigorous standards... Alrighty, hopefully this works without anything funky

11:26:00

Moon
yeah, it seems pretty good it's what I've been using now

11:24:51 Many moons, one me

Do you guys like gifyu? Is it safe? No funny business?

11:24:03 Many moons, one me

Icy
She looks so fierce!

11:23:49

chat is very monochrome lol <3

Icywolve pack

11:23:09 Icy/Rumi

-WP Click-
Shes so pretty now

11:22:32 Many moons, one me

I have a general dislike of strange(to me) websites

11:20:58 ⚫Cruella⚪

Thank you storm ridge, I posted.

11:20:51 Many moons, one me

Sleep, I'm not sure how. I'd rather not use an external link, but I do wanna put them in my bio

11:10:59

about to go slide a goofy encoded rick roll letter under my brothers door lmao
he doesn't have his phone right now so he won't even be able to decode it but it's gonna be funny when he finds out

11:08:05 Kneecap stealer

Picture of kitty(s)

11:05:36 Many moons, one me

Sleep, I was once having a panic attack while laying in bed and Ginger came over and very lovingly bit my face and hair. Didn't even leave a mark, just slobber

11:03:06 Kneecap stealer

1774/1900

StormRidge

10:48:35

Cruella - there are two links for possible codes listed in this thread
-WP Click-

10:37:00 ⚫Cruella⚪

Anyone have a toyhouse code?

10:30:44 Kneecap stealer

1727/1900

10:30:07 Kneecap stealer

Luci used to do that with me

10:17:39 Many moons, one me

My cats merely guard me from my emotions (one bites my calves or closest showing skin when I'm frustrated, and the other begrudgingly comforts me when I cry)

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11:28:35 Caesar

Pretty pretty dud
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Andypaws

11:28:03 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Ive never had an issue with gifyu

11:27:31 Many moons, one me

Alrighty then, done a bit of research, not seeing anything bad, it's one of the few allowed to be used by wp which means rigorous standards... Alrighty, hopefully this works without anything funky

11:26:00

Moon
yeah, it seems pretty good it's what I've been using now

11:24:51 Many moons, one me

Do you guys like gifyu? Is it safe? No funny business?

11:24:03 Many moons, one me

Icy
She looks so fierce!

11:23:49

chat is very monochrome lol <3

Icywolve pack

11:23:09 Icy/Rumi

-WP Click-
Shes so pretty now

11:22:32 Many moons, one me

I have a general dislike of strange(to me) websites

11:20:58 ⚫Cruella⚪

Thank you storm ridge, I posted.

11:20:51 Many moons, one me

Sleep, I'm not sure how. I'd rather not use an external link, but I do wanna put them in my bio

11:10:59

about to go slide a goofy encoded rick roll letter under my brothers door lmao
he doesn't have his phone right now so he won't even be able to decode it but it's gonna be funny when he finds out

11:08:05 Kneecap stealer

Picture of kitty(s)

11:05:36 Many moons, one me

Sleep, I was once having a panic attack while laying in bed and Ginger came over and very lovingly bit my face and hair. Didn't even leave a mark, just slobber

11:03:06 Kneecap stealer

1774/1900

StormRidge

10:48:35

Cruella - there are two links for possible codes listed in this thread
-WP Click-

10:37:00 ⚫Cruella⚪

Anyone have a toyhouse code?

10:30:44 Kneecap stealer

1727/1900

10:30:07 Kneecap stealer

Luci used to do that with me

10:17:39 Many moons, one me

My cats merely guard me from my emotions (one bites my calves or closest showing skin when I'm frustrated, and the other begrudgingly comforts me when I cry)

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM