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off for a walk

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04:07:53 NRC/Raven

Well I gotta go bye!

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Tort
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04:05:58 Tort, Len

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Ohh now I have a wolf to start training to be a battle wolf :)

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04:05:51 NRC/Raven

Owl
Pretty

04:05:17 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- My part babe

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Cute names

Empress Midnight

04:04:48 Lucky Frog Empress

The beanie buddy spider’s name is Striper because her abdomen is striped.

SouthernScorpion

04:03:41 Scorpion

trying to justify spending 50$ on a custom lol

Empress Midnight

04:03:31 Lucky Frog Empress

The beanie baby spider’s name is Spinner. That’s the name he came with.

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04:03:13 NRC/Raven

Scorpion
Yes

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04:02:57 NRC/Raven

Empress
Lol

SouthernScorpion

04:02:54 Scorpion

so is a 117 rarity wolf much more expensive, game wise, than a 82?

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04:02:34 Lucky Frog Empress

The teenie beanie spider’s name is Stony. His eyes are bright red, like he’s been smoking something other than cigarettes.

04:02:07 tiger\Owl|she\her

I still scream and I just yell at my dad till he kills it

Empress Midnight

04:00:54 Lucky Frog Empress

I don’t mind the little ones that aren’t dangerous. I do have three beanie spiders: teenie, baby and buddy.

Night Raven College

04:00:42 NRC/Raven

Spiders don't bother me as much as they did when I was younger

04:00:23 Juicy Arm Boy

Awhhh fuck all of this animation got deleted im screaming right now </3

Night Raven College

04:00:20 NRC/Raven

Lol I remember when I was a kid that when anything like a spider crawled on me I would scream like crazy 😂

04:00:06 Juicy Arm Boy

I love spiders

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04:08:03 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

off for a walk

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04:07:53 NRC/Raven

Well I gotta go bye!

Night Raven College

04:07:06 NRC/Raven

Tort
😍

04:05:58 Tort, Len

-WP Click-

Ohh now I have a wolf to start training to be a battle wolf :)

Night Raven College

04:05:51 NRC/Raven

Owl
Pretty

04:05:17 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- My part babe

Night Raven College

04:05:05 NRC/Raven

Empress
Cute names

Empress Midnight

04:04:48 Lucky Frog Empress

The beanie buddy spider’s name is Striper because her abdomen is striped.

SouthernScorpion

04:03:41 Scorpion

trying to justify spending 50$ on a custom lol

Empress Midnight

04:03:31 Lucky Frog Empress

The beanie baby spider’s name is Spinner. That’s the name he came with.

Night Raven College

04:03:13 NRC/Raven

Scorpion
Yes

Night Raven College

04:02:57 NRC/Raven

Empress
Lol

SouthernScorpion

04:02:54 Scorpion

so is a 117 rarity wolf much more expensive, game wise, than a 82?

Empress Midnight

04:02:34 Lucky Frog Empress

The teenie beanie spider’s name is Stony. His eyes are bright red, like he’s been smoking something other than cigarettes.

04:02:07 tiger\Owl|she\her

I still scream and I just yell at my dad till he kills it

Empress Midnight

04:00:54 Lucky Frog Empress

I don’t mind the little ones that aren’t dangerous. I do have three beanie spiders: teenie, baby and buddy.

Night Raven College

04:00:42 NRC/Raven

Spiders don't bother me as much as they did when I was younger

04:00:23 Juicy Arm Boy

Awhhh fuck all of this animation got deleted im screaming right now </3

Night Raven College

04:00:20 NRC/Raven

Lol I remember when I was a kid that when anything like a spider crawled on me I would scream like crazy 😂

04:00:06 Juicy Arm Boy

I love spiders

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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