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04:08:03 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

off for a walk

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04:07:53 NRC/Raven

Well I gotta go bye!

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04:07:06 NRC/Raven

Tort
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04:05:58 Tort, Len

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Ohh now I have a wolf to start training to be a battle wolf :)

Night Raven College

04:05:51 NRC/Raven

Owl
Pretty

04:05:17 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- My part babe

Night Raven College

04:05:05 NRC/Raven

Empress
Cute names

Empress Midnight

04:04:48 Lucky Frog Empress

The beanie buddy spider’s name is Striper because her abdomen is striped.

SouthernScorpion

04:03:41 Scorpion

trying to justify spending 50$ on a custom lol

Empress Midnight

04:03:31 Lucky Frog Empress

The beanie baby spider’s name is Spinner. That’s the name he came with.

Night Raven College

04:03:13 NRC/Raven

Scorpion
Yes

Night Raven College

04:02:57 NRC/Raven

Empress
Lol

SouthernScorpion

04:02:54 Scorpion

so is a 117 rarity wolf much more expensive, game wise, than a 82?

Empress Midnight

04:02:34 Lucky Frog Empress

The teenie beanie spider’s name is Stony. His eyes are bright red, like he’s been smoking something other than cigarettes.

04:02:07 tiger\Owl|she\her

I still scream and I just yell at my dad till he kills it

Empress Midnight

04:00:54 Lucky Frog Empress

I don’t mind the little ones that aren’t dangerous. I do have three beanie spiders: teenie, baby and buddy.

Night Raven College

04:00:42 NRC/Raven

Spiders don't bother me as much as they did when I was younger

04:00:23 Juicy Arm Boy

Awhhh fuck all of this animation got deleted im screaming right now </3

Night Raven College

04:00:20 NRC/Raven

Lol I remember when I was a kid that when anything like a spider crawled on me I would scream like crazy 😂

04:00:06 Juicy Arm Boy

I love spiders

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04:08:03 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

off for a walk

Night Raven College

04:07:53 NRC/Raven

Well I gotta go bye!

Night Raven College

04:07:06 NRC/Raven

Tort
😍

04:05:58 Tort, Len

-WP Click-

Ohh now I have a wolf to start training to be a battle wolf :)

Night Raven College

04:05:51 NRC/Raven

Owl
Pretty

04:05:17 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- My part babe

Night Raven College

04:05:05 NRC/Raven

Empress
Cute names

Empress Midnight

04:04:48 Lucky Frog Empress

The beanie buddy spider’s name is Striper because her abdomen is striped.

SouthernScorpion

04:03:41 Scorpion

trying to justify spending 50$ on a custom lol

Empress Midnight

04:03:31 Lucky Frog Empress

The beanie baby spider’s name is Spinner. That’s the name he came with.

Night Raven College

04:03:13 NRC/Raven

Scorpion
Yes

Night Raven College

04:02:57 NRC/Raven

Empress
Lol

SouthernScorpion

04:02:54 Scorpion

so is a 117 rarity wolf much more expensive, game wise, than a 82?

Empress Midnight

04:02:34 Lucky Frog Empress

The teenie beanie spider’s name is Stony. His eyes are bright red, like he’s been smoking something other than cigarettes.

04:02:07 tiger\Owl|she\her

I still scream and I just yell at my dad till he kills it

Empress Midnight

04:00:54 Lucky Frog Empress

I don’t mind the little ones that aren’t dangerous. I do have three beanie spiders: teenie, baby and buddy.

Night Raven College

04:00:42 NRC/Raven

Spiders don't bother me as much as they did when I was younger

04:00:23 Juicy Arm Boy

Awhhh fuck all of this animation got deleted im screaming right now </3

Night Raven College

04:00:20 NRC/Raven

Lol I remember when I was a kid that when anything like a spider crawled on me I would scream like crazy 😂

04:00:06 Juicy Arm Boy

I love spiders

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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