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not broken, but it did give me a jumpscare when my entire message looked like an ancient evil chant ToT
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don't look in the sales chat then... ^^"
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Venn,
If you ever do make more palettes I'll probably be the first one at your forum haha
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The broken emojis are killing me
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Still cant think of a theme for a new palette, so i guess you cma ha e the reins for now. 😅
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By the way, I like your palette ; )
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Lol. Ok.
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Venn,
Ahah, I knew a palette artists gut would pick the easiest palette for me to do.
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I go to sleep now. Because I am... losing my mind. Lol
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so good at decisions
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Reads like a countdown
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Okay well someone needs to break the tie
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 The Sigma
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not broken, but it did give me a jumpscare when my entire message looked like an ancient evil chant ToT
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Sig - so long as you don't break the chat.
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don't look in the sales chat then... ^^"
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blehh
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Venn,
If you ever do make more palettes I'll probably be the first one at your forum haha
 Vennenum
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The broken emojis are killing me
 Vennenum
12:28:38 Venn/Venne
Still cant think of a theme for a new palette, so i guess you cma ha e the reins for now. 😅
 Spirit Wolves
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Dad

By the way, I like your palette ; )
 Vennenum
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Lol. Ok.
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Venn,
Ahah, I knew a palette artists gut would pick the easiest palette for me to do.
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12:22:47 Mr Palette Guy
Venn, pick one :0
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12:22:38 Space Pirate Captain
I go to sleep now. Because I am... losing my mind. Lol
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so good at decisions
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12:22:17 Venn/Venne
Reads like a countdown
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Okay well someone needs to break the tie
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Constructive Criticism on human art?April 4, 2021 09:25 PM


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Heyo! I just recently got into drawing human art, since before now I've only drawn feral animals and furries :)
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I have a W.I.P peice of one of my human characters that I think looks really good, but you guys are much better artists than I'll ever be, so I'd like to hear your opinions on it! ^^ (post images isn't being the best right now so you'll have to click the link to see it :<)

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Edited at April 4, 2021 09:26 PM by Toby
Constructive Criticism on human art?April 6, 2021 09:52 AM


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It does look pretty good, the coloring is solid, the anatomy is pretty much all there. It's a wonderful chibi-type style. If I were to adjust anything really, it'd be to make the glasses / goggles either a bit bigger (a little more cartoonishI guess lol) to help the eyes be a bit more visible. But that's just a personal preference.
Constructive Criticism on human art?May 10, 2021 02:49 AM


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I like that you have a strong direction for your personal style.
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The thing that throws me is the angles. The best way that I can explain this is by showing, so I took your drawing, lowered the opacity, and drew on the centerlines. Everything except the face is viewed straight on. The face, based on where the eyes are (and the bridge of the glasses), is turned. But the other facial features, ears, hair, and hair bow don't turn with the head.
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Edited at May 10, 2021 02:50 AM by Barlow

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