Wolf Play : Thoughts/light criticism ?

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11:13:15 ET

I left to do my classwork for one second and the convo changed entirely whoops - sorry if I missed any messages!

11:13:10 alive but also dead

I'm always of the mentality that accidents are a way for mods to remind everyone the rules, not just the person who broke them. For example, when I accidently use text speak or post in the wrong chat, even if the mods call me out for it I know that others remember the rules in that moment too. Plus, the mods here are super nice, so if you ever feel like they're actually mad at you if you talk to them privately I'm sure they'd be happy to explain more/ease your anxieties. (I say that mainly because usually the people the mods are actually mad at aren't going to go out of their way to discuss the issue and make amends).

Cybertronion

11:12:57 Cyber / Onion

With the no text talk rule being pitched for helpign those with screen readers / not being first language speakers of English, I honestly wouldn't mind no text speak. It really do help them out, I think.

(I use a screen reader sometimes because my eyes can get weird. Hearing that automated voice try to say GG is never not the funniest thing ever)

Polargeist

11:12:14 Chro (he/him)

Honestly, chatspeak is just the way people talk on the internet nowadays. The chat rules are very old and quite outdated

kycantina

11:12:04 ky / dh hoarder

The one that always gets me is linking a wolf that's for sale/breeding if you're just talking about it in chat. I don't think it's a Rule rule but some mods are really strict on it lol

Lackadaisy

11:12:03 Stray, LT | H/H

Vah,

Yup. It's way too hot for me to grammar right now.

MLadySkylar

11:12:01 P'Sky

Would a unicorn be considered a good animal for February?
>>
I've only found hearts to fit this theme

SpiritGuardian

11:12:00 Mr Palette Guy

Cries,
ohh I did that once haha.
I think he was my first custom I made to be a breeder

Graywing

11:11:54 Slate, Gray

Demon

everyone uses GG and i never see anyone get in trouble so i think it should be added

Demon Mistress

11:11:51 The Scary Mod

I just went and checked the rules again theres only 2 rules about sales and both are pretty 'Open ended' I think

Malpha

11:11:44 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Cries,
Oh I did that on my old account thinking I was sneaky XD

Quasar Hoarder

11:11:32 Quasar, QH

-WP Click-
should I get the red rose or the crushed rose for her?

Lackadaisy

11:11:22 Stray, LT | H/H

Cyber,

I think some things can vary is that. I just avoid abbreviations or text speak entirely unless I'm using abbreviations for military terms, like "LT", "DEP" or "USMC". I haven't been warned about it so I could assume things like that are fine? I just tend to be very careful and make sure to reread the rules if I think I'm doing something iffy.

SpiritGuardian

11:11:14 Mr Palette Guy

Demon,
I"GG" just seems like a not wolfplay chatspeak-.. Just like IRL
it's weird, maybe because the rules have been like this for so long

MLadySkylar

11:10:55 P'Sky

Cries
Very true
Sometimes I forget to speak English here xD

Malpha

11:10:48 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Zeraphia,
Same. Once you read them once thoroughly you shouldn't really ever have to go back. But maybe it's not how everyone works i guess

CriesInTheNight

11:10:38 Sorrowful Howls

@spirit xd and i accidently advertised breeding in main cause i wanted to show off a boy, happens

Demon Mistress

11:10:22 The Scary Mod

@Spirit
Eh I was in middle school
@Howling
Unfortunately its my job ^^' So please spell out your words
@Cyber
GG is going to be added pretty soon I think...

MLadySkylar

11:10:09 P'Sky

Nux
Honey and lemon work wonders

SpiritGuardian

11:09:52 Mr Palette Guy

cries,
exactly lmao, I accidently advertised my palette shop by mentioning I was proud of the posts haha

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11:13:15 ET

I left to do my classwork for one second and the convo changed entirely whoops - sorry if I missed any messages!

Yakuza

11:13:10 alive but also dead

Cybertronion

11:12:57 Cyber / Onion

Polargeist

11:12:14 Chro (he/him)

Honestly, chatspeak is just the way people talk on the internet nowadays. The chat rules are very old and quite outdated

kycantina

11:12:04 ky / dh hoarder

The one that always gets me is linking a wolf that's for sale/breeding if you're just talking about it in chat. I don't think it's a Rule rule but some mods are really strict on it lol

Lackadaisy

11:12:03 Stray, LT | H/H

Vah,

Yup. It's way too hot for me to grammar right now.

MLadySkylar

11:12:01 P'Sky

Would a unicorn be considered a good animal for February?
>>
I've only found hearts to fit this theme

SpiritGuardian

11:12:00 Mr Palette Guy

Cries,
ohh I did that once haha.
I think he was my first custom I made to be a breeder

Graywing

11:11:54 Slate, Gray

Demon

everyone uses GG and i never see anyone get in trouble so i think it should be added

Demon Mistress

11:11:51 The Scary Mod

I just went and checked the rules again theres only 2 rules about sales and both are pretty 'Open ended' I think

Malpha

11:11:44 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Cries,
Oh I did that on my old account thinking I was sneaky XD

Quasar Hoarder

11:11:32 Quasar, QH

-WP Click-
should I get the red rose or the crushed rose for her?

Lackadaisy

11:11:22 Stray, LT | H/H

SpiritGuardian

11:11:14 Mr Palette Guy

Demon,
I"GG" just seems like a not wolfplay chatspeak-.. Just like IRL
it's weird, maybe because the rules have been like this for so long

MLadySkylar

11:10:55 P'Sky

Cries
Very true
Sometimes I forget to speak English here xD

Malpha

11:10:48 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Zeraphia,
Same. Once you read them once thoroughly you shouldn't really ever have to go back. But maybe it's not how everyone works i guess

CriesInTheNight

11:10:38 Sorrowful Howls

@spirit xd and i accidently advertised breeding in main cause i wanted to show off a boy, happens

Demon Mistress

11:10:22 The Scary Mod

@Spirit
Eh I was in middle school
@Howling
Unfortunately its my job ^^' So please spell out your words
@Cyber
GG is going to be added pretty soon I think...

MLadySkylar

11:10:09 P'Sky

Nux
Honey and lemon work wonders

SpiritGuardian

11:09:52 Mr Palette Guy

cries,
exactly lmao, I accidently advertised my palette shop by mentioning I was proud of the posts haha

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Thoughts/light criticism ?

January 7, 2021 05:54 AM

starwolfs

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Could I get some thoughts on this, first thing though I know the one wing is horrible xD so please look over the detail as best as you can since I know that's wrong and didn't realize that until I was done lol. I was trying to figure out how to use drawing app and this what came out of it , also I've added 2 others that could use some light criticism as well

done on January 7

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done on January 26

done on January 25

^ this one I actually really like the concept of and will probably do redraws of to see if I've in proved on my skills ^
( credits belong to me )

Edited at January 28, 2021 07:50 PM by starwolfs

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January 13, 2021 12:48 AM

Wisp

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It looks like for the shading you did smudge, but I would recommend using a blending tool. Also, try to have the light coming from the same direction (the horns have shadows going to the left, but the wings have shadows going to the right, and the spikes have the shadows going up).

I would recommend a deep blue for shading, and a very light yellow for lighting (that's what personally use).
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Since you included lighting in the eyes I'd recommend lighting the rest of the piece

If the dragon has arms then I would attach the wings to the arms

I would make the nostrils a little smaller.

I hope nothing came across as mean, I always feel like I'm being bad when giving constructive criticism.

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January 13, 2021 05:47 AM

starwolfs

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Thanks for the constructive criticism all the stuff that you mentioned I didn't realize until you said it, I just knew something didn't look right about it .

Thanks also for the tips on the shading and lighting those are very helpful , first time actually doing digital and I really didn't have a clue how to use anything

don't worry you don't sound mean at all :)

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January 28, 2021 07:29 PM

Former Pack

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sorry if any of this seems rude at all XD

I would personally recommend something showing some part of the mouth, because in the current picture, you can't see any of it, and it looks a bit odd.

that is actually my only suggestion, you did an amazing job, all in all!

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January 28, 2021 07:42 PM

starwolfs

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Yeah I seam to be struggling with mouths on everything and this was early on ( I think the first thing I actually did was this piece ) so I wasn't even going to try a mouth at the time. I am working on them now but they still need work for me to be comfortable with them

thanks for your input ^^

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