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01:06:18 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Rook
Your wolf got beat by an old lady

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pvp anybody?

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Yo, hey, Tonneoshet. ^^;

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Ehh I'll probably just message you tonight, a bit has happened since we've last spoken I believe

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Okay wow I need to chill with emojis

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Emmet the pirate, we both know I'm not online often 💔💔
I should log in more. I am about to watch a movie with a friend so I cant stay 💔

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12:47:58 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Pirate Buddy
I'm doing ok-ish , just didn't want to deal with random dms from non friends, you can message me though ^^

12:45:21 Call me your cowboy

Emmet the pirate, was tempted to message but you have pms closed to the public 🤨
You okay?

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12:43:23 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Do I see my pirate Buddy online 👀

12:39:53 Call me your cowboy

Khaos, yeah I just needed to see your username. 👋 was too lazy to look at friends list

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😭

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Khaos come into chat

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crazy

12:05:41

crossover

12:04:52 renee

hi chat

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Anyone up for a She ra or Harry potter fandom role play?

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01:06:54 Rook | Please PvP Me

thanks for letting me know

Continental Wolves

01:06:18 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Rook
Your wolf got beat by an old lady

01:00:15 Rook | Please PvP Me

pvp anybody?

12:57:48

Yo, hey, Tonneoshet. ^^;

12:57:19 Uncle Tony

Good evening chat

Continental Wolves

12:51:21 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Pirate Buddy
Ehh I'll probably just message you tonight, a bit has happened since we've last spoken I believe

12:50:14 Call me your cowboy

Okay wow I need to chill with emojis

12:50:03 Call me your cowboy

Emmet the pirate, we both know I'm not online often 💔💔
I should log in more. I am about to watch a movie with a friend so I cant stay 💔

Continental Wolves

12:47:58 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Pirate Buddy
I'm doing ok-ish , just didn't want to deal with random dms from non friends, you can message me though ^^

12:45:21 Call me your cowboy

Emmet the pirate, was tempted to message but you have pms closed to the public 🤨
You okay?

Continental Wolves

12:43:23 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Do I see my pirate Buddy online 👀

12:39:53 Call me your cowboy

Khaos, yeah I just needed to see your username. 👋 was too lazy to look at friends list

12:39:21 Kaos || Kháos

😭

12:38:21 Call me your cowboy

Khaos come into chat

12:05:51 renee

crazy

12:05:41

crossover

12:04:52 renee

hi chat

11:58:41 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a rp or chat pm me please

11:49:30 Lycan, My can

Anyone up for a She ra or Harry potter fandom role play?

11:36:53 ezra, he/him

okay im going to go to bed like a human person. goodnight everyone

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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