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 Owlstar
09:11:36 tiger\Owl|she\her
no we still don't know her dad. oops forgot the link -Click-
 Owlstar
09:10:51 tiger\Owl|she\her
this is in the warrior cats series broken code. mini fanfic. I have an obsession with bumblestripe and the charicter speaking is my OC owlfeather
 Eye of Eternity
09:10:24 tern | they/he
'then' being the book with chapter 42 i have no idea what the title is
 Eye of Eternity
09:09:59 tern | they/he
owlstar
yessssss chapter 42 my beloved :3
was sophie's father ever revealed? i havent read any of the books since then (i dont even know if any more were published)
 Owlstar
09:08:12 tiger\Owl|she\her
thanks. I'm a HUGE keefe fan...GO CHAPTER 42!!!
 Eye of Eternity
09:06:54 tern | they/he
owlstar
damnnn thats tall :00
if youre not going for an established species, then i'd say he looks great :3 definitely dark and wild
im personally not a fan of unnatural colours on ferals for whatever reason but he looks pretty cool
 Owlstar
09:05:21 tiger\Owl|she\her
just fanfic my OC transforms into a giant 8.5 foot tall wolf or a tiger sized cat with wings XDD long long story. shes a pyro, froster and a shade
 Eye of Eternity
09:03:46 tern | they/he
owlstar
is he supposed to be an established species from kotlc? as far as i can remember theres humans, elves, goblins, and various animals,,
 Owlstar
09:02:50 tiger\Owl|she\her
I'm tired I would but I should be alseep
 Serpents
09:02:21 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
anyone up for a rp or chat pm me I'm bored
 Owlstar
09:01:33 tiger\Owl|she\her
-WP Click- here sorry running on "emergency energy reserves"
 Eye of Eternity
08:59:55 tern | they/he
owlstar
kotlc mention.....
can you resend the link? it doesnt work and my memory is hazy
 Faulty Demons
08:59:53 Ollie, Gold
Gaze
Oh, thanks!
 Owlstar
08:58:07 tiger\Owl|she\her
its for keeper of the lost cities I'm going for slightly dark but pretty. he's gonna be my OCS mate. don't question. I wanted him to be a lil bit wildish too
 Eye of Eternity
08:57:03 tern | they/he
'tim the killer' just dealt me psychic damage get me out of here
 Eye of Eternity
08:56:06 tern | they/he
owlstar
depends on what kind of world/role you're going for, honestly
 Eye of Eternity
08:55:37 tern | they/he
ollie
the far back thigh looks a little thick? otherwise it looks awesome :0
 Owlstar
08:55:33 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- how do you all like this pelt idea for a male wolf In something? I have ha freehand base ready for him. can yall please respond. i want to know if he needs editing
 Eye of Eternity
08:54:33 tern | they/he
eer
its pretty fun and very very stressful when its not fun
i do too :3 theyre so fun

alright goodnight for whenever you head out ^^
 Faulty Demons
08:53:51 Ollie, Gold
Thoughts on this sketch? Anything look off?
-Click-

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 Owlstar
09:11:36 tiger\Owl|she\her
no we still don't know her dad. oops forgot the link -Click-
 Owlstar
09:10:51 tiger\Owl|she\her
this is in the warrior cats series broken code. mini fanfic. I have an obsession with bumblestripe and the charicter speaking is my OC owlfeather
 Eye of Eternity
09:10:24 tern | they/he
'then' being the book with chapter 42 i have no idea what the title is
 Eye of Eternity
09:09:59 tern | they/he
owlstar
yessssss chapter 42 my beloved :3
was sophie's father ever revealed? i havent read any of the books since then (i dont even know if any more were published)
 Owlstar
09:08:12 tiger\Owl|she\her
thanks. I'm a HUGE keefe fan...GO CHAPTER 42!!!
 Eye of Eternity
09:06:54 tern | they/he
owlstar
damnnn thats tall :00
if youre not going for an established species, then i'd say he looks great :3 definitely dark and wild
im personally not a fan of unnatural colours on ferals for whatever reason but he looks pretty cool
 Owlstar
09:05:21 tiger\Owl|she\her
just fanfic my OC transforms into a giant 8.5 foot tall wolf or a tiger sized cat with wings XDD long long story. shes a pyro, froster and a shade
 Eye of Eternity
09:03:46 tern | they/he
owlstar
is he supposed to be an established species from kotlc? as far as i can remember theres humans, elves, goblins, and various animals,,
 Owlstar
09:02:50 tiger\Owl|she\her
I'm tired I would but I should be alseep
 Serpents
09:02:21 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
anyone up for a rp or chat pm me I'm bored
 Owlstar
09:01:33 tiger\Owl|she\her
-WP Click- here sorry running on "emergency energy reserves"
 Eye of Eternity
08:59:55 tern | they/he
owlstar
kotlc mention.....
can you resend the link? it doesnt work and my memory is hazy
 Faulty Demons
08:59:53 Ollie, Gold
Gaze
Oh, thanks!
 Owlstar
08:58:07 tiger\Owl|she\her
its for keeper of the lost cities I'm going for slightly dark but pretty. he's gonna be my OCS mate. don't question. I wanted him to be a lil bit wildish too
 Eye of Eternity
08:57:03 tern | they/he
'tim the killer' just dealt me psychic damage get me out of here
 Eye of Eternity
08:56:06 tern | they/he
owlstar
depends on what kind of world/role you're going for, honestly
 Eye of Eternity
08:55:37 tern | they/he
ollie
the far back thigh looks a little thick? otherwise it looks awesome :0
 Owlstar
08:55:33 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- how do you all like this pelt idea for a male wolf In something? I have ha freehand base ready for him. can yall please respond. i want to know if he needs editing
 Eye of Eternity
08:54:33 tern | they/he
eer
its pretty fun and very very stressful when its not fun
i do too :3 theyre so fun

alright goodnight for whenever you head out ^^
 Faulty Demons
08:53:51 Ollie, Gold
Thoughts on this sketch? Anything look off?
-Click-




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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