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Thank you, but the way the paws line up is coincidence, and since im already on the coloring stage, trying to go through and fix it is painful.
Again, thanks a ton! The character in the first image belongs to my partner over at Waekefield. That was a little piece i did to hopefully help cheer her up :')
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snickerboodles said:
  If I could maybe get some opinions, that'd be great :') Gentle, constructive help is always appreciated. I understand that the lines are a bit rough/uneven. Please don't say anything about that, as i can't do anything about it. Thank you ;-;
The first image is wonderfully done- I like how you used the shading and the flat colors! ... As for the lineart- I think the lines are decently smooth. They aren't overly rough and it still looks great to color! BUT there's one thing that's glaring out at me. See the front paws? How the two wolves have their paws on top of each other, so that the paws connect into one line? That makes it hard for our viewers to differentiate between the two images. Also, when coloring- it would be hard to get the colors perfectly between those lines. We remedy this by making sure those lines don't overlap. They're called tangent lines, and they're not good. Otherwise- I love the entire fluffy drawing! You're doing great! XD
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That's okay Snickers, now you know what you can look out for when you draw something else! You don't HAVE to take my tips, but it's out there either way XD |
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Hey-o! Any advice on this one? No shading yet cause I got lazy lol |
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flower, that looks amazing!! |
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Hey-o! Any advice on this one? No shading yet cause I got lazy lol
I'm loving her posture and expression! It's so wonderfully done, even with just the basic colors! One little tip- see her right hand? It looks almost connected to her dress. Meanwhile on her left hand- we can clearly see her fingers above her dress. Other than that little bit, it's great! You're doing a fantastic job with her! ^^ |
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Looks like this has almost died. Time to revive it Current progress on this. Thoughts? |
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Dionysus said:
Looks like this has almost died. Time to revive it Current progress on this. Thoughts?
Lol- thanks for the revival! ^^
They're absolutely adorable! I love how their eyes have different expressions! Also, if it's an age-sheet, it would be best to put pup-teen-adult for a better impact,. I know you're not done- but teen's tail isn't quite as fluffy as the adult and pup! With that said- it's adorable! Can't wait to see the finished result! ^^ |
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It's kind of an age sheet, but I had a small-medium-large idea that I wanted to turn into something I could use for an example on my future adopt shop. If it would be better going pup-adol-adult, though, I'll switch it. And yeah, I was wondering if the adol's tail should be fluffy- the pup's isn't supposed to be, so if it looks like it is, I'll need to fix that |
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4 days of inactivity way too long XD. What do y'all think of tis: |
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@Lans I love the feathers! It's gorgeous! I'm not sure if the legs are too small- but seeing I'm not an expert- I can't tell! XD That stripe by the eyes is adorable- and the eyes itself have me a bit unnerved. As always- you did a great job~ What kind of dino-bird is this by the way? ^^ |
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