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@Coyote
I think you should add some crease lines on the back of the neck to show the extreme position looking more natural. Otherwaise, beautiful!
@Carpe
These are looking good! My only suggestion is to keep working on your anatomy, and you'll be great!
@Snow Your horses barrel is too long and skinny and the head is a bit blocky. Otherwise, it's looking pretty good! Try using some photo references to help get your anatomy closer ^^
@Brave
It's awesome! My only thing is the eyes are offset a bit. ^^ |
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https://i.postimg.cc/8CZW8qY9/HARPG_Art_Auction.png
Can I get critiques on this? Especially the background, I feel like it could be much better. |
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Let me compliment it first before the criticssss,
The horse anatomy and the shading on his/her chest is made wonderfully, and your backgrounds get better every day man!
The thing that bothers me is the hill in the back, it's like, pretty visible even with all the fog and to me that ruins the "dramatic" of this piece. Also the colors of the horse feel and look warm, but the environment is cold, blue and foggy, so maybe you could do something with that next time?
Overall this piece is amazing ;w; |
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Neytrix said:
Let me compliment it first before the criticssss,
The horse anatomy and the shading on his/her chest is made wonderfully, and your backgrounds get better every day man!
The thing that bothers me is the hill in the back, it's like, pretty visible even with all the fog and to me that ruins the "dramatic" of this piece. Also the colors of the horse feel and look warm, but the environment is cold, blue and foggy, so maybe you could do something with that next time?
Overall this piece is amazing ;w;
Cool! Thank man! |
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I love that piece so much Dragon o.O Something about the braids is bugging me though >.< I cant quite grasp it but they seem a little off. I think the fourth one down could be a little slimmer and darker/more shaded? Might just be me. And like Neytrix said, hill in the back, foggy misty hue, that kinda stuff lol. |
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That piece is amazing, holy shit!
I'm going to agree with the other two about the hill thin, but I also think you could make it a little bit more dramatic by playing with lighting. Try adding a dark vignette and putting some shadows down in that bottom right corner.
Also if you could even just use a 'Gaussian blur' for the hill in the back, it would add more perspective to the piece. |
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Thank you guys for the critique. I have one more I wanna post real quick
https://i.postimg.cc/nr55nJkz/Drakehest-Mutation-Auction-Entry.png
I'm a bit happier with the background and shading, but I feel like it could be improved. Can I get a critique please? |
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Dragon's Fire said:
Thank you guys for the critique. I have one more I wanna post real quick
https://i.postimg.cc/nr55nJkz/Drakehest-Mutation-Auction-Entry.png
I'm a bit happier with the background and shading, but I feel like it could be improved. Can I get a critique please?
I love it! The only thing I see wrong(may just be me) is that the head(the cheek area) looks a little too big for the body, other than that it's looks amazing. |
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Dragon The rocks and mountains look amazing. One thing that I can point out is that the details compared to the mountain to the right compared to the one behind the horse is that it has less detail even though it's closer while the one further away has more detail. It still looks amazing but from the place of the angle the closer rock would seem to have more detail then the other one but it looks amazing! |
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Blegh. So, I really need some opinions/critique on this piece here.
(This is a screenshot, so ignore the dark grey border.)
https://i.postimg.cc/wTt8btRG/image.png
I've only done a handful of lineless painting style pieces with backgrounds, and I don't draw a lot of birds either, so this is waaay out of my comfort zone for me. But, since I'm a glutton for punishment, I challenged myself to attempt this. And I kind of hate it right now.
It's not exactly done (or, at least, I don't want to call it done yet), but I'm out of ideas on how to make this look better. I really don't like it, but I'm not sure what to do right now. So any advice on that, or critique on what I can fix, would be great. Thanks. ^^;
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