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 Azrael
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 Nevermore.
05:28:20 Never/Nev
You all are reminding me that its about time from my six month catch up on webtoons lmao
 technoblade
05:27:42 Lil Techy | Techno
cres

i'm only on like episode 11 so i have a while cause I was reading Your Throne which is a wild fucking ride
 Amygdala
05:27:29 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cae
I think i would die if i found a webtoon in slovenian lmao

The only things i read in slovenian are books i have from my grandma like beli očnjak (the white fang) and knjiga o džungli (the jungle book) but it's for adults. It has 2 parts and it's actually really interesting
 Revelry
05:26:56 Rev
Vote? 👀
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 Caeruleum
05:26:53 Cae, Blue
hell yeah! i just got caught up a few days ago myself! :D
 technoblade
05:26:33 Lil Techy | Techno
cres

yup!
 Caeruleum
05:26:07 Cae, Blue
tech, the list of possibilities is way too long but i wanna go with orv?
 Moth
05:25:41 
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what do we think the odds of her giving birth before spring 1 are...
 Caeruleum
05:25:25 Cae, Blue
me asking someone to put their unbred male up every winter 3rd: -Click-
 technoblade
05:25:17 Lil Techy | Techno
cres

speaking of webtoons guess what i'm finally reading/catching up on
 technoblade
05:24:38 Lil Techy | Techno
amy

whoopsie
 Caeruleum
05:23:23 Cae, Blue
cae is good sobs

oh my God that reminds me of the time i found a webtoon translated to croatian... the worst >.<

the only thing i love reading in cro is grička, as it was originally written in croatian ^^
 Amygdala
05:21:31 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cae
Eh....book and book series is the same...if it's interesting enough i am finishing it in a week lol
My best achivement is reading the whole vampire academy in 4 days
 Amygdala
05:20:24 Amy/Anpmygdala
Techno
Damn you...you stole all my luck for those quests lol
 Amygdala
05:19:59 Amy/Anpmygdala
Should i rather call you cae...and i understand what you mean...soo cringe. I can't even read books in slovenian. English is way better
 technoblade
05:19:26 Lil Techy | Techno
amy

i found the jade monkey first XD
 Caeruleum
05:18:50 Cae, Blue
one more book... series* :D
 Amygdala
05:18:34 Amy/Anpmygdala
Techno
;-;
 Caeruleum
05:18:23 Cae, Blue
seeing slavic words in english setting is making me cringe so bad, not gonna lie :')

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Constructive Criticism on human art?April 4, 2021 09:25 PM


Luck

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Heyo! I just recently got into drawing human art, since before now I've only drawn feral animals and furries :)
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I have a W.I.P peice of one of my human characters that I think looks really good, but you guys are much better artists than I'll ever be, so I'd like to hear your opinions on it! ^^ (post images isn't being the best right now so you'll have to click the link to see it :<)

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Edited at April 4, 2021 09:26 PM by Toby
Constructive Criticism on human art?April 6, 2021 09:52 AM


Zeraphia

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It does look pretty good, the coloring is solid, the anatomy is pretty much all there. It's a wonderful chibi-type style. If I were to adjust anything really, it'd be to make the glasses / goggles either a bit bigger (a little more cartoonishI guess lol) to help the eyes be a bit more visible. But that's just a personal preference.
Constructive Criticism on human art?May 10, 2021 02:49 AM


Former Pack

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I like that you have a strong direction for your personal style.
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The thing that throws me is the angles. The best way that I can explain this is by showing, so I took your drawing, lowered the opacity, and drew on the centerlines. Everything except the face is viewed straight on. The face, based on where the eyes are (and the bridge of the glasses), is turned. But the other facial features, ears, hair, and hair bow don't turn with the head.
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Edited at May 10, 2021 02:50 AM by Barlow

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