Wolf Play : Can I get some constructive criticism?
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 Zeraphia
11:33:47 Spooky Vah
See, I prefer more... round about trauma rather than... /that/

That just... feels like too much...
 distant-screams
11:33:30 katy | beetle
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name ideas for my new oc? :)
 Luna👻
11:33:20 Silver (She/her)
Hi star!
 Zeraphia
11:33:16 Spooky Vah
Techno

Oh go for it! I'm always open for help when it comes to Ocs XD

Naming Finch took forever--
 Luna👻
11:33:08 Silver (She/her)
Vah
Oh I have many good trauma ideas I also have a guy who was kidnapped very young and raised by his abusive kidnappers then finds out his life is a lie, finds his parents, then they get killed in front of him I am evil
 technoblade
11:32:41 Lil Techy | Techno
Zera

Want me to DM you?
 ST4RB10SS0M
11:32:12 Star/Bloss
Hey chat^^
 Luna👻
11:31:37 Silver (She/her)
* OC not of
 Destinations End
11:31:35 Toliska, Desti, Coy
I'm super excited for tonight and really hope to not get disappointed like last time :/

The Aurora Borealis is supposed be visible where I live in the states tonight
 Magnus Bane
11:31:35 Mag/Maggy
Ready for FMC :D
 Zeraphia
11:31:06 Spooky Vah
Techno

I might need some help XD

I'm not great at pre-traumatizing characters XD
 Nevermore.
11:31:06 Never/Nev
Vah

On one hand I want to say he's too cute but on the other I say destroy him. Always leads to the best character developments
 Luna👻
11:30:59 Silver (She/her)
Vah
Ooo, traumatize! I have this one of whoÂ’s mom died and his dad was cheating and then physically abused him and he got beat up to the point of hospitalization like 7 times at school and h was expiremented on but he found a boi he loves :) thatÂ’s the one thing that went right in his life
 technoblade
11:29:53 Lil Techy | Techno
Zera

Do it! If you need help I can always tell you what I did to mine XD
 Luna👻
11:29:09 Silver (She/her)
One time I lost- what was it- my ankles or something like that
 Zeraphia
11:28:48 Spooky Vah
Hmm... to traumatize or to not...

-Click-

Decisions, decisions.
 technoblade
11:28:42 Lil Techy | Techno
-86 spaces left in this hole.

This is why I should invest more in relic hole expansions...
 Boeing
11:28:07 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Luna
Not yet. I think.
 Luna👻
11:27:12 Silver (She/her)
Oh no, are my knees in danger?
 Boeing
11:26:46 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Kneecap stealer are you there?

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Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:28 AM


Dystopia

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On this boi, thinking about making a private species
also looking for priceing help, so if you'd put around what you'd pay for somthing like this that would be great
the wings are supposed to be that small, these are magic based creatures and their wings grown when they need to fly

Edited at October 30, 2020 02:41 PM by Fr3ak
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:28 AM


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All credit to me
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:37 AM


X-Marxs The Spot

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This would look like a really creative species! I'd definitely pay, like, 200-300 mush for one of these!
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:43 AM


Makato

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They be pretty. I'd pay somewhere around 500-1000
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 11:12 AM


Adira

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I'd suggest making the wings a little larger unless you purposely made them small. :)
Other than that it looks great! I'd pay around 500 or so.
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 12:33 PM


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Adira said:
I'd suggest making the wings a little larger unless you purposely made them small. :)
Other than that it looks great! I'd pay around 500 or so.


Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 01:55 PM


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I don't know if this helps or not but it looks like the antlers are sitting on top of the head instead of coming from it. Also 500 to 1000 for sure^^

Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 02:18 PM


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Crescents said:

Adira said:
I'd suggest making the wings a little larger unless you purposely made them small. :)


I would pay like.... 200-500 mush for something like this
Can I get some constructive criticism?November 2, 2020 12:35 PM


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I would probably pay around 300-350 mush, I think. As for criticism, the feathers going down the front legs/elbows seem to be a little off. I don't know exactly what it is, but they don't seem to follow the form of the leg quite as they should. Otherwise it looks great!
Can I get some constructive criticism?November 2, 2020 12:35 PM


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THIS IS AWSOME!

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