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 distant-screams
07:21:09 katy | beetle
-WP Click-
ugh i thought i found my new custom base but she has a negative vital e.e
 LunarKingdom
07:18:16 
Hello
 Wind hunters
07:15:29 
Hi
 distant-screams
07:14:31 katy | beetle
i think i've gotten used to it at this point xD i've had this palette for 6+ months i think

but i can see how it would be bothersome
 Caeruleum
07:13:57 Cae, Blue
understandable :( i mean, its not a big deal but lowkey would be annoying me A LOT :')
 distant-screams
07:12:52 katy | beetle
Cae,
i have no idea how to code </3 i bought this palette lol

maybe one day i'll ask spirit to fix it
 Caeruleum
07:11:59 Cae, Blue
katy, valid, but have you considered: fixing it lmao

eternal, youre welcome! yeahhh, especially whehn pups are held hostage for 90+ hours :')
 Eternal Sunshine
07:10:31 
Thanks blue, it feels like forever xD
 distant-screams
07:10:28 katy | beetle
Cae,
understandable! hopefully she gets better at battling :)

and i think it's because of my palette lmao
 Caeruleum
07:08:59 Cae, Blue
ive invested way too much in her cp overall to not bring her along :')

bro why is your battle screen like that, whats with black rectangles under images e.e
 distant-screams
07:07:13 katy | beetle
Cae,
how rude of her e.e i had a wolf like that and he's condemned to be a stud now
 Caeruleum
07:06:35 Cae, Blue
this one wolf of mine keeps fleeing from battles. her agility? maxed. she also keeps missing. her resolve? also maxed. what a waste of cp -.-
 ZEFHYR
07:06:21 
ah i see it now...the light the light
 distant-screams
07:06:08 katy | beetle
-Click-

weird, they're meant to join in the battles like this.
 ZEFHYR
07:03:28 
nah they dont. unless it has to set up sspecially somehow?
 Caeruleum
07:02:52 Cae, Blue
i keep forgetting familiars can help in battles lmao
 distant-screams
06:59:57 katy | beetle
i like bringing my panda to explore with me, lol. she's not very useful but she is cute.
 Caeruleum
06:59:49 Cae, Blue
labor happens after 80-96h of pregnancy
 ZEFHYR
06:59:27 
ok thank you. bet it looks cute
 Eternal Sunshine
06:58:33 
Hey! What are the hours a wolf can go into labour.

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Critique please!April 21, 2020 04:23 PM


Zora

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I'm rather new to drawing so I'm clearly not going to be that good. But I'd like to improve! Be warned this is not digital art so the pictures won't be that good.

All credits go to me so please no stealy!
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I mainly want help with anatomy because, well just look at those legs! Help with faces would be nice too. I'm taking all critique though! Be as harsh as you see fit!
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:14 PM


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I don't think I am in much of a position to give criticism, lol. But I can tell you that one artist, Remarin (on youtube and deviantart) has had a huge influence on my style and has helped improve my wolf anatomy a lot. They do a lot of headshots so it will be a great help with canine faces/facial proportions, expressions and teeth as well as colors and lighting and whatnot. Look them up some time, you won't regret it. ^_^
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:17 PM


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Well, you sure are really good at bodies! But you might need to bring the front legs down more to make it line up with the back legs. Other than that, it looks great. I'm not really the best at drawing bodies, so I am still learning also. I hope I helped.3.
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:20 PM


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@Blue Citrus
Alright, I'll take a look at them! Thank you for the suggestion!

@ITSYEMUM
Yea I'm not the best with lining up. I think for my next drawing I'll draw a line to help with paw placement. Thank you so much!
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:33 PM


Reathmuaz

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I think these are actually quite cute..! In terms of anatomy, if you want to keep a more cartoon-ish style, I suggest looking up wolf reference poses. There's usually some interesting positions to draw characters in, but it also really helps with the structure of your character. Maybe just look up canine anatomy in general, even if it sucks to study stuff like that, in the end (if you take the studying to heart), your pieces could really turn out great! I'm sure you'd get profit from it as well. ^^

Edited at April 21, 2020 06:37 PM by Thranduil
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:34 PM


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Your welcome, keep up the good art!

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