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 The Amethyst
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 Stygian Forest
07:28:59 
Eternity!
 Rimfax
07:28:42 
I never run into llorona in forest, but all the time in jungle and mountain. I have not tried other terrains
 kycantina
07:28:42 ky but it's spooky
Marsh, definitely, haven't seen llrona or banshee at all but moss people like every other move
 starmutt
07:27:26 marsh | they/it
im genuinely convinced its biome specific i cant be running into moss people 10 times and banshee 0
 Serpents
07:27:12 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
-WP Click- Move ideas Please reate to magic powers or stuff like that
 Everlasting Torment
07:26:58 Anubis, Samael
I haven't been in swamp in ages XD
 starmutt
07:25:54 marsh | they/it
oki going to the swamps
 Eternity
07:25:27 ET
I get so much llorona. No idea if it's terrain specific but I explore in swamp and get her all the time.
 The Pumpkin King
07:24:58 
Yeah, I love the Encyclopedia but when it says 'Found in Mountains' and then 'Findable? No' and then tells me I can only find Mint Seeds on levels 99 and above, I just want to stick with what's tried and true.

 starmutt
07:23:29 marsh | they/it
karma's list does make it easier to search more at once lol
 Everlasting Torment
07:22:49 Anubis, Samael
Star I completely forgot about that XD
 The Pumpkin King
07:22:33 
Real OGs still use this. -WP Click-
 Everlasting Torment
07:22:05 Anubis, Samael
Forest hmm ok thanks
 starmutt
07:21:52 marsh | they/it
@Anubis
level 5, encyclopedia is your best friend lol
 Forest Dwelling
07:21:47 Wolflocke Challenge
@Anubis

Neither parents are particularly heavy wolves so I'd assume the pup will most likely be between 90 - 100lbs
 starmutt
07:21:20 marsh | they/it
so many grims and baba yaga
never seen banshee or llorona in my life
 Everlasting Torment
07:21:07 Anubis, Samael
Where do I find this what level in swamp?
Defeat 5 Anhinga in battle. (swamp)
Completed: 0/5
 Amygdala
07:20:28 Amy/Anpmygdala
Marsh
If you have them for a quest you have bad luck lol
I didn't see a single la lorna today and i did 3k moves already🥲
 The Pumpkin King
07:20:05 
I feel like I get them constantly, what-

I've been in Jungle and Forest, mostly Jungle.

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Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 04:08 AM


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Seriously, don't hold back. I want to improve, and the only way to do that it with some good, honest critiques. All are wanted and very much appreciated :)



Link to my art gallery:
https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=5&t=26299&page=1

But, if you're lazy like me, here are some of my most recent artworks:
https://i.postimg.cc/5041gScN/Summer-Storm-Raffle.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/C1TJpcMS/Xery-Ref-Sheet.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/qvrjFbRr/Familiar-Background.jpg


Edited at July 11, 2019 04:14 AM by Wood Carve
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:22 PM


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I can give negative feedback. It’s perfect. Maybe draw each individual hair on the Animals? I donÂ’ know.

Edited at July 11, 2019 03:22 PM by CanadianGirl
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:22 PM


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I really like your art! I'd love an avatar from you
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:23 PM


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bro what
i tried to come up with some constructive criticism but i cant
your art is so perfect
like the composition, colors, background, everything
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:23 PM


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mara's pack said:
bro what
i tried to come up with some constructive criticism but i cant
your art is so perfect
like the composition, colors, background, everything


Same! My answer stands!
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:35 PM


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Your art is pretty good, I especially like the last piece (the gold field).
The main thing that stuck out and- in my opinion- doesn't seem to mesh well with the rest of the piece: is the brightness in color for the wolf(?) in the first image.

I think the only main parts that should be as bright as it is, would be: the back and the beginning of the tail. The rest should be a bit darker, since it would be in the shade.
I did notice that you added shadow around the head/front of the animal, so that's good.
Besides that, I only have two nitpicks:

-The grass along the edges of the trees are a bit too bright as well, just a hint too bright
-The rocks(?) also seem very white, rather than a more grey. That could be the type of rock, I'm unsure, but they really jumped out at me and took some attention away from the animal and fire, which I felt where the main focus points.

Aside from those minor things, again, your art is very beautiful. :)
Keep up the great work!
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:39 PM


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Thank you Mossious <3 I'll keep those in mind for the next thing I draw :D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:40 PM


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You're welcome and best of luck to you. 8D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 07:48 PM


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You're a super talented artist, first of all <3

I just want to say that one thing I am SUPER jealous of in your art is your backgrounds and environments. They're just so good and detailed, and pretty, and /gah/. I love em. :'D

One thing I do think that you can improve on, though, is the shading of your characters. It just looks a little too... soft and blended together, and sometimes causes them to blend in a bit too much with the background. I think just a bit more detail in your shading and a bit less smudging would make your art go a loooong way.

One other minor thing I wanted to critique, is that when making ref sheets, try to make the background color a bit more muted. On the sheet of Xery, for example, the red is a bit too bright and blends in with the red of the character, and makes it kind of hard to look at. It might benefit to desaturate the background a little bit, or make it darker/lighter, or even make it a different color entirely that just compliments the character.

That's about all I have to say. Your art is /super/ solid, and I can't wait to see you improve and have your art become more amazing in the future :D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 07:50 PM


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Thank you Dash!! <3

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