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 Demon Falls
05:33:47 
When you get rickrolled just turn the sound up and have a little dance round the room lol
 Karou
05:30:36 
oftentimes when I see a WP link in the chat I am inclined to believe it's a link to the rick roll; but alas I still click the link while expecting to get rick rolled all the same
 Old Money
05:25:24 elegance❀
-WP Click-
 The Pumpkin King
05:16:58 
Oh, okay. Thank you. c:
That's actually really helpful, lets me know I haven't missed out on giving that extra 50 to my SVs.
 Eternity
05:15:21 ET
Dominance staggering now excludes wolves with maxed out dominance, Woofer.
 The Pumpkin King
05:13:32 
-Click- what
 The Pumpkin King
05:11:31 
All my birthday apples put me at such a satisfying number. 123. :D
 Existence
04:40:50 Exist / Kuskyn
32220
That was unplanned xD
 distant-screams
04:28:30 katy | beetle
i wish the breeding specialization had 5 levels like the others :')
 devine
04:27:04 vi, devi
If my specialization is battle, why do none of the creatures I kill count towards progress?
 distant-screams
04:24:08 katy | beetle
Apples Saved: 40
6 more apples and i can make another custom ^^ getting close!
 Amygdala
04:22:10 Amy/Anpmygdala
Bye redd
 Red River Wolves
04:21:58 Redd Dead
Okay I should probably get some sleep before it becomes morning and I accidentally pull an all-nighter. Bye!
 Amygdala
04:17:52 Amy/Anpmygdala
Redd

Makes sense...i would lose like 3k dominance us i used it
 Red River Wolves
04:16:39 Redd Dead
Amy,
It would increase my dominance, but I don't trust it. I have them sorted in roles by dominance ranges. So basically, for the lore
 Amygdala
04:14:22 Amy/Anpmygdala
Redd
Damn...why didn't you use wolf totem to sort dominance?
 distant-screams
04:14:18 katy | beetle
Amy,
thank you :) i'm very excited to see what she produces pup-wise
 Red River Wolves
04:12:58 Redd Dead
I finally have a nonzero pack dominance. Only took an hour and 25k mush
 Amygdala
04:12:51 Amy/Anpmygdala
Katy
Wow amazing wolf
 distant-screams
04:12:09 katy | beetle
-WP Click-
paws for my new favorite wolf?

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Critique please!April 21, 2020 04:23 PM


Zora

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I'm rather new to drawing so I'm clearly not going to be that good. But I'd like to improve! Be warned this is not digital art so the pictures won't be that good.

All credits go to me so please no stealy!
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I mainly want help with anatomy because, well just look at those legs! Help with faces would be nice too. I'm taking all critique though! Be as harsh as you see fit!
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:14 PM


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I don't think I am in much of a position to give criticism, lol. But I can tell you that one artist, Remarin (on youtube and deviantart) has had a huge influence on my style and has helped improve my wolf anatomy a lot. They do a lot of headshots so it will be a great help with canine faces/facial proportions, expressions and teeth as well as colors and lighting and whatnot. Look them up some time, you won't regret it. ^_^
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:17 PM


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Well, you sure are really good at bodies! But you might need to bring the front legs down more to make it line up with the back legs. Other than that, it looks great. I'm not really the best at drawing bodies, so I am still learning also. I hope I helped.3.
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:20 PM


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@Blue Citrus
Alright, I'll take a look at them! Thank you for the suggestion!

@ITSYEMUM
Yea I'm not the best with lining up. I think for my next drawing I'll draw a line to help with paw placement. Thank you so much!
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:33 PM


Reathmuaz

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I think these are actually quite cute..! In terms of anatomy, if you want to keep a more cartoon-ish style, I suggest looking up wolf reference poses. There's usually some interesting positions to draw characters in, but it also really helps with the structure of your character. Maybe just look up canine anatomy in general, even if it sucks to study stuff like that, in the end (if you take the studying to heart), your pieces could really turn out great! I'm sure you'd get profit from it as well. ^^

Edited at April 21, 2020 06:37 PM by Thranduil
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:34 PM


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Your welcome, keep up the good art!

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