okay, sorry i was off for a bit!!! right now i'm spending a lot of my time writing something else, but it should be finished by today or tomorrow, so i can write whatever my heart so pleases after that.
i like the idea of two characters who take everything extremely seriously but meanwhile have far less of a grasp of what they're doing, how to do it, or where they're going than they think, contrasted by a third character taking none of this seriously who has a better grasp on the situation than both of them. since my guy is sort of taking his sweet time of all of this, i think it'd make for a fun situation where goings on are somewhat slow because of the way everyone's running circles around each other, whether purposefully or very much not so. i also like the idea of my guy seeing both of yours trying to control each other thinking they have the high ground and thinking of it as a kind of comedy show.