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Yeah the new shows are very dumb. I liked the Kitty Noir ( I think) and the boy in the Boo york movie.

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I am so mad because, omg, stunner, but both of your parents are high talent and you are trash
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-WP Click- Demon?? No. Demon king?? YES

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Oooo cool
Im doing pretty good. Im currently on a bus going to another school for an orchestra thing and the roof leaked on me and my friend so im kinda soaking

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Oh and when I'm on my trip in not gonna be on for those 3 days when I'm gone...

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I hate that for you lmao that would drive me crazy

Owl

:') For reals

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NRC
Same the new ones are stupid 😑 my favorite couple is Draculaura and clawd wolf their so cute

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I'm doing well, can't wait to go on my trip in 3 days. How about you?

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Looks like its gonna rain again outside yippee

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Hi Husky :]

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My cat Harry loves to become flat bread XDD

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Collar
Thats good to hear
Have fun with those tiktoks :3

Sir3n

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Hi chat

10:29:00 NRC/Raven

Rat
Yeah the new shows are very dumb. I liked the Kitty Noir ( I think) and the boy in the Boo york movie.

SouthernScorpion

10:28:50 Scorpion

I am so mad because, omg, stunner, but both of your parents are high talent and you are trash
-WP Click-

10:28:37 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- Demon?? No. Demon king?? YES

10:28:33 Husky

NRC
Oooo cool
Im doing pretty good. Im currently on a bus going to another school for an orchestra thing and the roof leaked on me and my friend so im kinda soaking

10:28:24 Altar 🦌

Husky
Im good! About to run away to watch tiktoks my lovah sent me

10:27:42 NRC/Raven

Oh and when I'm on my trip in not gonna be on for those 3 days when I'm gone...

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Collar

I hate that for you lmao that would drive me crazy

Owl

:') For reals

Lucky Rat

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NRC
Same the new ones are stupid 😑 my favorite couple is Draculaura and clawd wolf their so cute

10:27:03 NRC/Raven

Husky
I'm doing well, can't wait to go on my trip in 3 days. How about you?

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For me it’s gonna rain later today

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Hiii how are you

10:26:36 NRC/Raven

Looks like its gonna rain again outside yippee

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NRC
Hey ^^
How are ya

Vax

10:26:22 a rock in your shoe

collard greens
oki

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Hi Husky :]

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My cat Harry loves to become flat bread XDD

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Hi Husky

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Hi all ^^

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM