Wolf Play : Critique

Wolf Play Game

Wolf Play Game

Fall Month: 1

Day

Sunny

Chatbox

Willow moonlight

11:14:32

From the family role play

11:14:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ohhhh I flower ^^

11:14:17 cloud (he/they)

rat tired you?

Willow moonlight

11:13:05

Rat it me daisyeye

11:13:01 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Cloud!!!!! How is ya?

Willow moonlight

11:12:52

Ok tell me of any packs that have unwanted pup

11:12:45 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Her brother should be banana prince

11:12:44 tiger\Owl|she\her

She is commander of all banana wolves XDDD I also have a banana king too

11:12:21 cloud (he/they)

rat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

11:11:38 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Owl
I’ll gladly give the banana queen paws!

11:10:05 tiger\Owl|she\her

Hi chat sorry I poofed -WP Click- this is the banana queen she demands y’all give her paws. She is daughter of my fighting banana wolf XDDD

11:09:48 cloud (he/they)

tern

can we rp

Eye of Eternity

11:09:25 tern | they/he

ohhhh i missed taking a picture of my cat sleeping with his tongue out :(

Eye of Eternity

11:08:13 tern | they/he

hey cloud :3

eer
probably yeah :'3

11:07:28 Juicy Arm Boy

Eyeguy
You got this Lol

11:07:16 Juicy Arm Boy

No ?

Eye of Eternity

11:07:15 tern | they/he

eer
will do :3 just gotta figure out how to do that,,,
thank youu :33

Willow moonlight

11:07:00

Evergreen do you got and un wanted pups

11:06:46 cloud (he/they)

tern

hiii

Eye of Eternity

11:06:37 tern | they/he

willow
thank you :3

Refresh

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.

Quests

Embark on a Quest.

Alliance Battles

Join an Alliance.

Challenges

Hourly Damage Variances

	Western Rattlesnake : -2
	Water Moccasin : -2
	Black Bear : -1

Chatbox

Willow moonlight

11:14:32

From the family role play

11:14:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ohhhh I flower ^^

11:14:17 cloud (he/they)

rat tired you?

Willow moonlight

11:13:05

Rat it me daisyeye

11:13:01 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Cloud!!!!! How is ya?

Willow moonlight

11:12:52

Ok tell me of any packs that have unwanted pup

11:12:45 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Her brother should be banana prince

11:12:44 tiger\Owl|she\her

She is commander of all banana wolves XDDD I also have a banana king too

11:12:21 cloud (he/they)

rat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

11:11:38 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Owl
I’ll gladly give the banana queen paws!

11:10:05 tiger\Owl|she\her

Hi chat sorry I poofed -WP Click- this is the banana queen she demands y’all give her paws. She is daughter of my fighting banana wolf XDDD

11:09:48 cloud (he/they)

tern

can we rp

Eye of Eternity

11:09:25 tern | they/he

ohhhh i missed taking a picture of my cat sleeping with his tongue out :(

Eye of Eternity

11:08:13 tern | they/he

hey cloud :3

eer
probably yeah :'3

11:07:28 Juicy Arm Boy

Eyeguy
You got this Lol

11:07:16 Juicy Arm Boy

No ?

Eye of Eternity

11:07:15 tern | they/he

eer
will do :3 just gotta figure out how to do that,,,
thank youu :33

Willow moonlight

11:07:00

Evergreen do you got and un wanted pups

11:06:46 cloud (he/they)

tern

hiii

Eye of Eternity

11:06:37 tern | they/he

willow
thank you :3

You must be a member for more than 1 day before you can chat.

Forums

→ WolfPlay is a fun game! Sign Up Now! ←

My Subscriptions

Forums > Artwork > Art Help

1

September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

Neutral

Posts:0
#978319
Give Award

So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

#1

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

Neutral

Posts:0
#978605
Give Award

new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

Neutral

Posts:0
#978615
Give Award

Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

Neutral

Posts:0
#978706
Give Award

The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

Neutral

Posts:0
#979237
Give Award

Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

Neutral

Posts:0
#979265
Give Award

Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

Neutral

Posts:0
#979357
Give Award

the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

Neutral

Posts:0
#979412
Give Award

Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

Forums > Artwork > Art Help

1