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ooh I really want to see her pups

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2 more preggo females

Eye of Eternity

11:39:18 tern | they/he

good luck surviving easter to everybody who celebrates but doesnt want to

11:38:30 Winter

Someone on my other social media page got their kid an XBOX for Easter ;-; what the hell

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Happy Easter!

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Happy Easter!

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Apo,
hello how are you doing today?

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My greatest catch during the infat event -WP Click-

11:20:41 Medicinally Autistic

Hello all :)

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what pretty twins

11:15:50 Stalking chat

I honestly want to go cry in a hole
like why life why.

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One one is in labor and one is about to go into labor

Eye of Eternity

11:10:25 tern | they/he

morshu reference in a pokemon video.... i have been fed

11:09:33 Winter

Lmaooo

11:08:37 Kneecap stealer

Warning I only have 37 mush

11:08:24 Kneecap stealer

How much do you want for your popping feather xD

11:07:47 Winter

That's actually disgusting it's like inflation has hit the game in the recent years

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Eye of Eternity

11:43:40 tern | they/he

mossy
youre welcome :'3

11:42:01 Stalking chat

-WP Click-

ooh I really want to see her pups

11:41:07 a rock in your shoe

cyclops
thank you 🙏🏼

11:39:54 Kneecap stealer

2 more preggo females

Eye of Eternity

11:39:18 tern | they/he

good luck surviving easter to everybody who celebrates but doesnt want to

11:38:30 Winter

Someone on my other social media page got their kid an XBOX for Easter ;-; what the hell

11:37:14 a rock in your shoe

happy Easter to those who celebrate!

11:29:57 Acorn (She/Her)

Happy Easter!

11:27:28

Happy Easter!

11:22:43 Stalking chat

Apo,
hello how are you doing today?

11:21:15 Winter

My greatest catch during the infat event -WP Click-

11:20:41 Medicinally Autistic

Hello all :)

11:20:20 Stalking chat

-WP Click-

-WP Click-

what pretty twins

11:15:50 Stalking chat

I honestly want to go cry in a hole
like why life why.

11:15:15 Kneecap stealer

-WP Click-

-WP Click-

One one is in labor and one is about to go into labor

Eye of Eternity

11:10:25 tern | they/he

morshu reference in a pokemon video.... i have been fed

11:09:33 Winter

Lmaooo

11:08:37 Kneecap stealer

Warning I only have 37 mush

11:08:24 Kneecap stealer

How much do you want for your popping feather xD

11:07:47 Winter

That's actually disgusting it's like inflation has hit the game in the recent years

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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#753472
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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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